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| "Akane" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: shadowalker666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2009 03:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good story. It has been a long time but please update.
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Reviewed By: chako On: December 18, 2006 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey why dind't u continue u'r story.it has been since october since u continue this story.u should finish the story.i mean what's the points u do this story if u don't finish it.if u'r reading this i'm begging u 2 continue but either than that i really love u'r story'
| Reviewed By: Shinzen On: July 27, 2006 22:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Also, Akane kick the guy in the back once. Assuming again that these are your average perverts off the street, that probably would have snapped him like a twig. Remember, she regularly kicks Ranma or Kuno hundreds of feet away, and can break concrete blocks into powder without trying.
| Reviewed By: Shinzen On: July 27, 2006 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a good story, my only beef is that Ranma had a bit too much trouble with the 2 pervert thugs at the beginning. I mean, come on. This is a guy who spent his every waking moment for 10 years traning. He beat a half dragon, he beat a god, he can throw 20 punches a second, he can turn invisible and fire beams of energy. I dont think your average street punks are going to do anything to him other than defecate all over themselves and scream for mercy.
| Reviewed By: Tuisto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very nice story, original, and a well defined plot. I really enjoyed this one. Will look forward as to how you, the author, proceed with it. Thank You.
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