"Catch 22" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Azalea J [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 20:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE this fic! It's so funny and everything's so predictable, yet unexpected- I adore how you've handled the characters personalities; everything fits wonderfully with the show. I do hope it ends with Ryouga and Male!Ranma developing true feelings for each other, i'm a suker for those stories. My favorite part was when Ranma forgot to change back after visiting the bathroom. And I do hope that shaggy old man doesn't think he can get anywhere with Female!Ranma- he'll get his ass kicked into next week. Mind you, it might be fun seeing how Ryouga'll react when ranma's threatened... Kudos for an amazing story thus far! I eagerly await the rest!
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Title: Catch 22 Reviewed By: Crazed One On: August 09, 2006 01:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ranma and Ryouga are such a cute couple! this is one of the most orignal yaoi fics i ever read!Please! Please! finish this story! I love what yuo wrote so far! BYE!
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Reviewed By: anss123 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 13:35 CST Comment/Review: Argh cliffhanger, oh well it's not like I normally read male/male fics anyway. As far as m/m fics go your seems well written and managed to catch my attention despite me only intending to peek at it. If this had been a girl!Ranma/Ryouga fic I would have read the next chapter if/when it comes out.
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Reviewed By: Lord Kamui [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 17:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like this fic. So far I have enjoyed it. I really hope you'll continue this work. Not all day's you find a well done Ranma/Ryouga work.
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Reviewed By: ZukoZuko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 21:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Frist and for most you might get more reviews if you allow aynomonus reviews. Now on to the review, do like that it was Ryoga fualt for not making sure of the potion but that you not having him just fall for Ranma female form but the potion is no tring to get him to fall for the total package instead. This is where it seperate itself form other fic where it was allways Ranma fall for Ryoga becuase of his female form or some drug and wants to be female for him, or vice versus for Ryoga. Anyway keep up the good job your doing and update!
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