Reviewed By: YaoSnoozie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
(I've given more 10's...maybe I just don't review a fic unless its just that good...) Funya~an ^-^ What a stupendously heartwarming bit of awkward love-making on the beach. You kept in touch with the the cutie-couple very well and slipped in just the right amount of character-herding and quirk-mentioning. There were parts that made my heart go:"Thu-thump!" Really! There were. (Mostly Tidus's timid little tantrums and his brave efforts at...mm~ sex, I suppose...that sounds odd ^_^;;) Loved the flow of vocabulary and action-encompassing verbs, skillfully done. There wasn't a single phrase I had to re-read (except the juicy bits of smut*^_^* and the cringing uke bits that just screamed:"Love me, please") You sure did throw a lap full of problems(and pleasures) to Wakka. (He *did* blunder through them quite nicely, guided by your 'bewildering' author-shoves^^) Tidus' confession of his father's actions made my breath catch. I loved it. Ooh! And the interaction: wonderful. Each taking in the other's words, movements, and expressions and reacting in just the right way. I can't express how much I liked this fic, but I'll say this: This is one piece that I'll read over and over, the one I'll read after some horrendously done, mislabeled slop. This is one that'll lift my reading-spirits^^ Nya~
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