"Forgotten Race: Awaken to the New World, Child of the First Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ] | Reviewed By: darkwolvesoverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2005 19:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ya know, I think that this isn't bad. You need to be more pacific, though. And I need to do my stories in paragraph forms. ^^ so we all have things to improve on! I really like this so far, please update soon!!!! ~Dark Wolves
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