| "Even If You Cannot Hear My Voice" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: steelfether11 On: December 13, 2005 21:34 CST
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KILL KIKIO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EVIL PURE EVIL!!!!!!!!! SORY ABOUT THAT EXALENT STORY I HAVE ONLY READ TWO CHAPTERS AND I ALLREADY LOVE IT PS KIKIO IS AN EVIL SPITEFUL BITCH!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: oopy922 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 10:27 CST
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i love it i love it i love it!!!!!!!!!!! great update! and i totally loved the lemon!!!!!!!!
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. You really have used the manga behind it. It's sad you haven't received more reviews for all of the work you put into it. It's on my favorites list and I'll be sad to see it end, though all good things must come to an end eventually.
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Title: Kikyo the beeotch
Reviewed By: Shaaremaweth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter cause you can easily visualize every thing. I also like the way you stay true to the their personalities with out compromising your own take on the nature of their relationships, I also like that Kagome has so much depth. I know that Kikyo is particularly nasty in your eyes but as a reader I wasn't quite to the point where I felt she was a creep. She's not nice but I think she could be a bit worse. Some times the characters also seem emotionally redundant mad to sad mad to sad to sneak. I would like to have a bit more back up on how Inuyasha's state of mind progresses. I also would like to see more detail in the scene where Kikyo and Inuyasha talk, Is it a beautiful day for a bad conversation? Or is the space around them just as twisted and cold as their feelings for one another?
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw this is such a great story. I like your version of Naraku's death. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 16:04 CST
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i get the feeling that theres another plot comming into the story and for that i can't wait to see were the story is going. good luck with the following chaps.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 16:31 CST
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wow this would be an awsome ending to the actual anime. I cant wait till i get far enough into the manga and anime to see what facts you used in this story. good luck on your next chap.
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Reviewed By: Mysterium [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 08:33 CST
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The story is fabulous, so far. I'm adding it to my alerts list. ^^
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 18:48 CDT
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well i'm loving the story and i really hope kikiyo dies. i'm pretty sure theres a bunch of spoilers here but i haven't gotten into reading the manga yet (too expensive). well i hope to see an update soon. take care
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Reviewed By: marnika On: October 14, 2005 03:44 CDT
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good story.I'm kinda hit and miss on the manga so I really liked reading this;keep up the good work.
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