"Unwanted Betrothal" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 05:12 CST Comment/Review: interesting story, have you considered elaborating on the descriptions and emotions of the people a little bit more? well good luck writing.
| Title: Sweet! Reviewed By: Moon_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 18:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I got your review, thanks. My other reviews are a collection of stupid babble from my hentai obssesed ex-boyfriend. I like it so far, it is has good description and dark humor. Keep going!
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