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| "Lost, But Not Forgotten" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nsi On: April 14, 2006 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this pairing, but it's difficult to find fics with them, and even harder to find good ones at that. I enjoy your writting style, and I look forward to the update of this, and many other of your fics. One last thing. Angst is a fact of life, and is great for adding color to a fic, but try not to let the fic and it's plot revolve around it, please? And please give Ryou a spine, it doesn't have to be made of steal, but I have a hard time imagining 'Touzokuoh' finding a wimpering pussy attractive at all. You don't love victims, you use them then toss 'em. Besides, Ryou isn't really the victim type. He's more of a survivor.
| Reviewed By: lil' crazy head On: October 12, 2005 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love this fic! It was soooooo emotional I almost cryed!! (As ifI would ever!) Its mega cool and I would love an update as soon as you find time, kay?
| Reviewed By: Tjay Motou (nli) On: October 11, 2005 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad... more detail is needed, and so far it's okay... but i'm positive you can toss a little more detail in.
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 00:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is very good. Update soon, please.
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