| "The Furian" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Anon. On: May 14, 2006 09:26 CDT
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This is a pretty good story, but i liked the other one you had about the kids who got splashed with that stuff. when r u guys gonna work on that one?
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Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
every story needs a good beginning. this is definately a great beginning. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's pretty good.
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Reviewed By: you'll know who it is when you read it.man we're evil!!! On: December 21, 2005 19:22 CST
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SPEEDY: i dont know if you read curly211's reviews, so i'll tell you personally...this is my own personal verson of the wonderful christmas hit "grandma got run over by a reindeer" or a least heres the chorus. JACKIE:on curlys its different but this verson is way better.......here goes BOTH:"DUDEKILLER GOT RAN OVER BY A MUTATED REINDEER, WALKING HOME FROM NARAKUS BEDROOM CHRISTMAS EVE!YOU CAN SAY THERES NO SUCH THING AS SANTA, BUT AS FOR US, ODD_ULRICH93,CURLY211, AND GRIMEY WE BELIEVE! jakie:MERRY CHRISTMAS FROM OURS TO YOURS! everyone thats cool:PURPLR TO THE SECOND POWER!
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Reviewed By: TwistedEvilStapler [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 03:47 CST
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Nice. I'd love to see an update and find out what's going on, what the plot is. I think this first part was pretty good, and that's coming from someone who's not a big fan of the whole song thing.
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Reviewed By: hmonkey13 On: November 24, 2005 21:15 CST
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great story cant wait for next chapter ready grabs you into it but hard to understand some times with an ocasional dull spot
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Title: good start
Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice, very very nice. it's a good 1st chapter. it kind of sux u in. it doesnt really delve in2 the plot but its still a neat opening, it grabs ur attention n makes u want 2 read the rest. im highly impressed n i look 4ward 2 ur next update. hope u update soon. ~Cat~
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Reviewed By: suki_moon_princess nsi On: October 16, 2005 10:36 CDT
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Not bad, but if it's Inuyasha, you should have more than just the song in there. The song and the basic feeling was good, but there was absolutely no storyline in here.
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