| "The Medallion" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. You did a really great job writing this. You actually had me on the brink of tears during their 'final' moments together. *APPLAUSE* Congratulation on a story well done ^_^
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Reviewed By: evalhanne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this story had been any longer, I would have had to surgically remove my eyeballs from the computer screen. It's like a classic genie in the bottle story . . . but much much much better. The story drew me in and the depth of the characters really kept my interest and made me feel I knew them.
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Title: loved it!
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 21:10 CDT
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I absoluteley loved it! oh and ive been to that hotel. spent a weekend there.
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Reviewed By: danse [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very solid and fulfilling ending. Nice twist with Relena.... (@.@) Sure it's not the most original idea around (cheesy romances never are, but hey, I read it anyway), but your style is good and you captured the characters well. It was a really fun read. I would recommend this to others, and I just might. :D
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Title: There is no word to capture the intensity of this story
Reviewed By: kachiqua [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry i haven't given a review til the end but i just want to say that this was the greatest damn story i've ever read on mediaminer. There is a definite shortage of good, exciting, and completely heart-warming fics. This i think makes up for a good amount of wasted reading,not to mention the nice, lovely touch of bodily excitment. i swear i could've killed you at places you left off, but the ending just makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. and could give anyone the need to take care of something...
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow, i think this chapter may have been a bit rushed, but i still like it a lot. you did not say the end, so i have a feeling there is a bit more to it. i would have liked to see some expansion on feelings and the such, but it is ok. please update soon!
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Kalico [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like my ol' teach would say, "That was just loveliful". love the story. I've been keeping up with it for a few months now but never quite got around to review it. so i am now, obviously. you break my heart the way the story was going at first. such strong sexual frustration and deep rooted sadness and pain on both duo and heero's parts. love the duo Zechs relationship. they're as close as friends can get without sex i think you mentioned. zechs and wu are pretty cute too. lovely fic. how many chaps are after this? 2 or 3 i'm assuming. no matter though i'll fid time to check it out later. sigh...college is a time hog...srry like i said nice fic continue plz and i hope to see more from you.
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Title: ch13
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 11:13 CST
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*screams* man.... he has only six days!!! Why won't heero tell him?! does it have something to do with not wanting to wish on his own worse enemy, is there clause that inorder to break the curse he has to find someone to take his place? I have to commend you on the the chapters when they finally got together, those were well done!! but man... the wait... Happy holidays and thank you for sharing this wonderful story!
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Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 20:39 CST
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*cries* no no no...what a way to end a chapter, my heart reaches out for Duo...
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 18:56 CST
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"...Heero interrupted again. "I have... plans for us tomorrow night." He leaned over Duo's shoulder and put his mouth around Duo's corn dog, sliding his lips down, down, down before biting off a large portion, .. Oh man ... I laughed outloud and people looked at me like I'd lost my mind. This is great and I'm loving this story greatly. Keep the updates coming. I need to know why Heero won't tell Duo the catch to his curse. Maybe Duo should hide the medallion to be sure that someone doesn't take it. And hey WHOO says that after a month he has to give the medallion up??
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 17:43 CST
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wow, you made me cry there at the end of this chapter. so sad. good story though!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 06:27 CST
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Oh. My. Gosh. you can't drop the coin thingy!! let there be a way out of the curse PLEASE. for Duo and Heero can live happily ever after and whatnot. update soon!!!!
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Title: A Mouthful of Sock
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 09:05 CST
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Oh goodness! That was certainly an exciting chapter. What ever shall happen with our heroes? And I agree with Duo, Wufei should NEVER let that man go. o_o Damn.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 06:23 CST
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ick!! kill that bi--er pink loving onna!!! how dare she leave duo with those people AND take Heero away. kill kill kill or at least bash her. bash her GOOOD
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Reviewed By: Isha Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 01:00 CST
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Alright good one! I still love the relationship between zechs and wufei well done on that one.
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