| "The Medallion" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow, i think this chapter may have been a bit rushed, but i still like it a lot. you did not say the end, so i have a feeling there is a bit more to it. i would have liked to see some expansion on feelings and the such, but it is ok. please update soon!
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Kalico [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like my ol' teach would say, "That was just loveliful". love the story. I've been keeping up with it for a few months now but never quite got around to review it. so i am now, obviously. you break my heart the way the story was going at first. such strong sexual frustration and deep rooted sadness and pain on both duo and heero's parts. love the duo Zechs relationship. they're as close as friends can get without sex i think you mentioned. zechs and wu are pretty cute too. lovely fic. how many chaps are after this? 2 or 3 i'm assuming. no matter though i'll fid time to check it out later. sigh...college is a time hog...srry like i said nice fic continue plz and i hope to see more from you.
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Title: ch13
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 11:13 CST
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*screams* man.... he has only six days!!! Why won't heero tell him?! does it have something to do with not wanting to wish on his own worse enemy, is there clause that inorder to break the curse he has to find someone to take his place? I have to commend you on the the chapters when they finally got together, those were well done!! but man... the wait... Happy holidays and thank you for sharing this wonderful story!
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Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 20:39 CST
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*cries* no no no...what a way to end a chapter, my heart reaches out for Duo...
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 18:56 CST
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"...Heero interrupted again. "I have... plans for us tomorrow night." He leaned over Duo's shoulder and put his mouth around Duo's corn dog, sliding his lips down, down, down before biting off a large portion, .. Oh man ... I laughed outloud and people looked at me like I'd lost my mind. This is great and I'm loving this story greatly. Keep the updates coming. I need to know why Heero won't tell Duo the catch to his curse. Maybe Duo should hide the medallion to be sure that someone doesn't take it. And hey WHOO says that after a month he has to give the medallion up??
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 17:43 CST
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wow, you made me cry there at the end of this chapter. so sad. good story though!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 06:27 CST
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Oh. My. Gosh. you can't drop the coin thingy!! let there be a way out of the curse PLEASE. for Duo and Heero can live happily ever after and whatnot. update soon!!!!
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Title: A Mouthful of Sock
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 09:05 CST
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Oh goodness! That was certainly an exciting chapter. What ever shall happen with our heroes? And I agree with Duo, Wufei should NEVER let that man go. o_o Damn.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 06:23 CST
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ick!! kill that bi--er pink loving onna!!! how dare she leave duo with those people AND take Heero away. kill kill kill or at least bash her. bash her GOOOD
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Reviewed By: Isha Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 01:00 CST
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Alright good one! I still love the relationship between zechs and wufei well done on that one.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 10:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o_O AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really different and wonderful. Can't wait to see if they get to stay together.
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Reviewed By: Isha Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 23:41 CST
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WOO HOO conflict! I can't wait to see what happens next! I've been waiting for the other shoe to drop and you put it in perfectly. Until next time.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 17:08 CST
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is something going to change about the curse? i mean it'd be sad if Heero had to continue going in and out of the coin thingy with Duo loving him and all. update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Gingitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 17:01 CST
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Yes! They finally got together! I really hope that they find a way to break the curse so that our fav couple can stay together!! Love this story......
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