| "Without a Lullaby" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nikolle On: November 13, 2014 14:01 EST
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"To have that privilege granted on such terms of.... Jaken thought
hard on what would be the right thing to say... such a detachment
of reality...? He frowned... more like an absence of mind, he
thought to himself... was not worth it." I really like how you
wrote Jaken in this chapter. He is so true to his depiction in the
anime! And I particularly relate to his thoughts above - it
expresses something for me that applies to some situations that I'm
dealing with right now.
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Reviewed By: Nikolle On: November 12, 2014 22:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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The way you've described Sesshomaru and Kagome's mindset and
thoughts is just amazing!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2011 03:21 EDT
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That was very good..........but I am confused. Who could he not bring back??? Inu,Sango and Miroku??? |
Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 17:00 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an interesting story and somehow I think this is in some way connected to your Sleep Paralysis story as the wish she made it that was the same one she made in this one. It is a sad story yes; but at least it turned out ok in the end. Thanks for writing this.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 14:08 EST
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awwwwww i loved it!!!!!!!!!! make a sequel!!!!!!! if u want to that is =] :) ^-^
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Reviewed By: nekokyttin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 02:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story, though I wonder if maybe a sequel is in order? It's a great story and to see what it would be like to have Sesshomaru being pinned in a *ahem* dog pile with six kids would be hilarious! Anyway, thank you for filling a whole day with ficcy genius! Would love to read more but it is far too late to read another! Thanks again!
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Title: Many applause
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awsome and touching fanfic you had created and congrats on finishing it as well. ^ ^ It was absolutely wonderful. -Kashu
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Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 20:24 EST
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THAT WAS SO AWESOMELY WONDERFUL!! SO SAD AND HAPPY!! LOL... IT'S LIKE IT WAS MADE TO FIT MY FEELINGS!! AWESOME JOB I LOVE UR STORY!!
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Reviewed By: Mrs_Sensitive [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story and only had one probolem with it I do not think Sesshomaru would use the word G-spot. I now what it is but my brain had a hard time rapping that around. anyway it was an overall good story. one other thing though some of your chapters were just as sort as ming so I realy do not thing you should complain.I am not saying that the chapters in my storys will not get longer its just thouse chapters are short.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 15:30 EDT
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me really likey the fic. nice job.
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Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thank you Luna!! I loved this so much, I couldn't stop til I was finished. I am impressed with how Sesshoumaru's change was so gradual, and the end... total sweetness! Bravo!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 03:57 EST
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I enjoyed reading Lullaby. I felt that you did a fairly good job of keeping the characters in character. Changes to Sessh and Kagome were not overdone. I was particularly pleased with the way you portrayed Kagome in her trauma. Very believable. Very touching. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 22:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: March 15, 2006 15:55 EST
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well done. not many authors can keep me on a sess/kag fic for long, they almost always make sess ooc, or kags sees inu/kik together and runs off..i loved the ending too, so sweet and fluffy.
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Trin71 (Not signed in) On: March 15, 2006 02:05 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story from the first time I began reading it. ^_^ I still think words alone can't describe how delighted I am with your creativity. You made the impoosible, possible. ~APPLAUDS~ Very tastely written. I encourage EVERYONE to read this story. One of the few truely UNIQUE written Sesshoumaru and Kagome fanfics! The wish, that was a nice touch! ^_^ ~GRINS~ So, does that mean you will write another story that begins with them meeting once again in another lifetime? ^_^ HEE HEE! Kidding! Congrats! You're an incredible writer! Keep going! I would love to read more of your work! Good luck and thank you for giving us such a wonderful story! ^_^
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