Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, but why no lemon???? I wish you could continue n put kikyo in it to see what inuyasha's gonna tell her, then atleast ending with naruku dead n inuyasha have bout 2 pups in the end. You kno what i mean? Complete the jewel, mate them n even have sango n miroku having their own kids. I kno it must sound like alot, n i'm new on this site, i'm actually starting a story, but i haven't post it, n i also have lost of assignments to do bfore school opens. And again i say, i love your story, do continue to write, you have excellent potential. nice job. Kagome313
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