"A Friendly Infatuation" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Akane Kageno On: January 24, 2007 17:34 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Pleeeeeeeease update! I wanna know what happens. So pleeeeeeeeeeease write some more. It's a really good story with lots of drama and conflict. Lots of people just write "happily-ever-after" stories. They're nice, but kinda predictable. I like yours because you never know what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 00:49 CDT Comment/Review: great fic! do Eiji and Tezuka get back together? how does Momo-chan react? update soon!!
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Reviewed By: queenphoenix7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 22:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review: They are really, really OOC, Tezuka in particular. You write well, but you need to focus on getting the characters' personalities right.
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Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 08:17 CST Comment/Review: *sniff*sniff* YOU TELL 'EM TEZUKA!!
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Reviewed By: Ari V. On: October 18, 2005 05:38 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: omg!! awesome story!!! >< *why didnt i think of it?* lol, well, PLEASE continue it! i must see what happens next! we must knowwwwwww! wahaha! -ari-
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 10:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: What a great story. This is the first time I've ever read about this pairing and I love it. I hope you continue this wonderful story. Keep up the wonderful work ^__^
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