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 Title: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession)
Reviewed By: ADarkNightsObsession [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 26, 2006 16:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
COME ON! It's been 5 friggin months!!!!! The time of updateing is upon us!!!!
 Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Kaname_Inu_fan  On: May 29, 2006 10:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why aren't you updating?! I've been waiting forever!! Ack. Gomen, I shouldn't act so parinoid... PLEASE UPDATE!!! I'M DIEING HERE!!!! I must know what happens next!! Does Inuyasha and Kagome get back together?! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! Write more!!!
 Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kaname_Inu_fan  On: May 18, 2006 18:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE!!!! UPDATE!!!! I'm dieing to know what happens next!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!! *gets down on knees* I beg you!!! Please update as soon as you can!! Ja ne! ~Kaname~
 Reviewed By: ADarkNightsObsession [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 28, 2006 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOMAN!!! If you don't update soon I will be forced to bite you as well as bombard your myspace with rants of your lateness!!!!...which I will actually do in a minute! BWAHAHAHAHAHA... Lol I love you...even if you are being lazy with your non-updating evilness of doooooooooom
 Reviewed By: hellkite  On: April 17, 2006 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hmm looks like i missed the fight -_- i always miss all the fun...o well give um hell guys
 Title: I know, I'm UBER late! >.>
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 06, 2006 17:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Shar-Shar, great chap, my girl! I see you took a page out of my book 0.~ The song fit perfectly and I loved how everyone had a personal tragedy. It was well written, and as always,fucking awesome. I'm waiting on Tao Moons, girl. *impatiently looks at watch* Is it time yet????? LOL I'm loving that story & yep, I'm still listening to "Dance Inside" You've created a monster, chica!!
 Title: For her fans.
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2006 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi there, I'm here to let all of u know that shar's having a BIG block for her story 'Tao Moons' and is try to find time for this fic. We her friends are helping her with it, so please hung in there! Yasha-boy, Ricky-boy, and me will let y'all know everything from time to time thats going on. Thanks^_^
 Title: ...oooooookay
Reviewed By: ADarkNightsObsession [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 02, 2006 23:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am sorry friend of critic. I am sorry that you are blaming Kagaga No Subaba for soething that us fans said. You should not blame the author! As for your friend and the other critic. What they said was unjust and loatheful. They were responded to exactly as they themselves behaved. They said that the grammar, the story line, and the way the story was written wasn't very well done (putting what they said lightly). There are so few mistakes in her writing. I have never read or seen another story on this site or any other that has the same story line. And as i have said before i AM an author and i have studied with writers of EVERY style through mentoring with writegirl. I have studied the way more books are writen than i care to count, and i like this story better than the bestseller that I am reading now. And you have to admit that the things that those critics said were NOT okay they did not review this story. What they said was not the way someone should talk to another person. If they don't like the story than fine they can have their own opinion. But they made the choice to be insulting about waht they thought. Instead of saying how the story could be improved and what it is about it they dislike, they took it too far and burned the hell out of it. If you play with fire you get burned, but please do not blame Kagaga No Subaba for her Fans reactions to these slandering remarks. And just so you know. I feel bad for you. Because you and your friend are both so low that you have to say things like this to make yourslef feel good about yourself at the end of the day. And That my friend is inexcusable. GoodNight. Portia
 Reviewed By: hellkite  On: March 31, 2006 00:02 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hmm...people to weak to follow their dream will always try and crush yours the only bad thing i can say about this story is that it takes forever to get new chapters...but that is understandable... (\/) (0.o) > I am Bunny, and I saw fuck the flamers (>
 Title: Fuck off critics!!
Reviewed By: Kaname_Inu_fan  On: March 23, 2006 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, first things first. If you don't like the fic then don't review or come back! Simple as that, bitch! Second, I'm alright with people giving advice to improve fics to make them better, but when you both just flame the poor aothor you're crushing her pride! That is just sick! Third, get a friken' life for pete's sake! If you flame people because you're bored, you either need to get a friken' hobby or get out! Seriously, I've read good fics before, and wrote a few myself, and I have never sen someone so DISGUSTING in my entire life! If you even try to report this aother, you're going to have a lot of her fans (including me) shoving up insults and flames up your ass! So back the fuck off already and let the girl do what she's best at! (love your story, Kagaga No Subaba! Please continue and don't let these flamers beat you down! )
 Title: Lalala! Fuck off get a life.
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 23, 2006 08:51 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Soooo you're the 'so called' friend of the critic bitch. What they couldn't take their own shit back had to send u? Well as u can see don't nobody give a damn about u or your friend. Ya wanna help your friend out tell them to leave shar alone cuz y'all ain't just fuckin wit her, your fuckin wit all her fan too. Words can hurt and thats why your friend said the things she/he or she-he did! But, guess what Yasha-boy, Shanny, Ricky-boy, her fans, and me all have her back! You know we her friends and fans most of had your 'so called' one in tears or u wouldn't of said shit. U also didn't do your homework or u would know just how much of a ass-shit u looked like say "no one would care" have ya read all the review or are ya just going by what your friend said? Well tell Ms.Man to do their homework too. I mean Yasha-boy's right y'all most like her cuz u wouldn't know she even updated wit out her being in your favs. So take ya nasty asses and fuck off or go to hell which ever makes ya happy and know that WE don't give a damn about ya or what ya gotta say, so keep it to yourself where it's saved from US k!^_^ Now you have a lovey dovey day don't let u & your friend get fucked up K. And god bless ya lots^.~ wit lot of love LW.... LOV YAS SHARY SHAR!!!! but ya know this giirrrll.XD
 Title: Lalala! Fuck off get a life.
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 23, 2006 08:47 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Soooo you're the 'so called' friend of the critic bitch. What they couldn't take their own shit back had to send u? Well as u can see don't nobody give a damn about u or your friend. Ya wanna help your friend out tell them to leave shar alone cuz y'all ain't just fuckin wit her, your fuckin wit all her fan too. Words can hurt and thats why your friend said the things she/he or she-he did! But, guess what Yasha-boy, Shanny, Ricky-boy, her fans, and me all have her back! You know we her friend and fans most of had your 'so called' had to be in tears or u wouldn't of said shit. U also didn't do your homework or u would know just how much of a assshit u looked like say "no one would care" have ya read all the review or are ya just going by what your friend said? Well tell Ms.Man do their homework too. I mean Yasha-boy's right y'all most like her cuz u wouldn't know she even updated wit out her being in your favs. So take ya nasty asses and fuck off or go to hell which ever makes ya happy and know that WE don't give a damn about ya or what ya gotta say, so keep it to yourself where it's saved from US k!^_^ Now you have a lovey dovey day don't let u & your friend get fucked up K. And god bless ya lots^.~ wit lot of love LW.... LOV YAS SHARY SHAR!!!! but ya know this giirrrll.XD
 Title: Fuck Off!
Reviewed By: Shanny  On: March 18, 2006 13:37 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well you know what "Friend of critic who 'I' bitched out", Your funckin 'Friend' keeps bitching my best friend out just because she's writing her own fic that alot of people love. If you asses don't like it then don't bother to review, k? So leave my friend alone or you're gonna get your ass kicked.
 Title: Come on now!
Reviewed By: Yasha-boy  On: March 16, 2006 04:50 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Is it me or do you bitchs have no life. I mean you come back over & over for what? She has 171 review only 3 or so of those review are from your so called friend who I believe is the same critic from before! #1 She wasn't the only one to bitch your friend out. Shit her FANS did too, but I don't see your ass going to them and tellin them off. #2 If this critic can call my sister a bitch and treat her like shit when she doesn't even know her, then she can do the same-fuckin-thing back. Don't put out if ya can't take your own shit back! #3 I know damn well wit all the fans she has their ain't no way ya can sit there and say nobody cares for her work! Did ya see *Portia*(Portia,I love ya girl have both books;-P) reviews she has two books that are in BookStores NOW and one on the way, She told shar that she should become a real author and have her work in bookstores herself aswell. #4 Ya do know that your friend is critic2? WOW 2 critics and 1OO's of FANS who have told the critics to kiss theirs & Shar's ass! Oh wait a few that said SUCK MY DICK BITCHS!!! Yeah she such a bad author whatever should she do. As for tellin on her to MM your late cuz people have already went to MM about your friend so if ya go to MM you'll just look like an asshole, but then again you already do. Now for 3,OOO times IF you LIKE key word LIKE this fic review.^_^ If you DON'T like it DON'T I say again DON'T LIKE the fic then don't REVIEW IT!! Your friend had to have kept coming back to read it in order to have review it, you had to have kept reading it also...THAT MEANS YA LIKE IT MOTHER FUCKER!!! Danm what the fuck bitchs move the hell on are y'all that loney? Get laid do something wit your life, come on! Now have a lovey, nice, and bless day^_^ Yasha-boy...XD p.s I love yas sis
 Title: Listen hun... *Sighs*
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 15, 2006 16:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Look, I'm not one to really get involved in situations like this after a certain point in time... and when you review to an incident that happened close to 20 comments ago… my patience really runs thin. It was YOUR friend that bitched me out first and I am absolutely sure that before then, they never knew me. So for them to say horrible things about me and my fics without even knowing who I am is really immature. I can't lie to my fans… and I openly admit that what my critics say about me bothers me sometimes… and with situations like my last critic, it almost brings me to tears because I just don't get how people can be so cruel. I've said before about 1,000 fucking times… if you like the fic, congrats to you. If you don't, don't even bother to read it let alone REVIEW to it! You're only wasting my time and whatever valuable time you need to screw yourself with. Because after all… even if you did report me, and I did get the boot from MM again… my fans would be all over your ass in a heartbeat. I've had a good run on this site, and if this IS the end, then so be it. I'm tired of having to put up with shit like you anyways. Oh and by the way... you're an idiot for mentioning that you're friends with that last critic I had...
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