| "Heart Breakers League" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Title: I feel kind of bad for you
Reviewed By: Friend of Critic you bitched out On: March 15, 2006 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know... I feel really bad about telling you this because I've read your previous reviews from critics. But you've gotta admit that if you have more than one critic there's a problem. Obviously there are a few people out there that don't like your work... big deal but when you have to blow off on my friend like that just because they had their opinion about your stupid fic, that's when I think you really are a sucky ass author. Don't go bitching out my buddy because your fic sucks. It's not their fault, that's your own damn issue! So stop being such a bitch and stop nagging at my friend or I'll report you to MM. Because honestly, if you disappeared again from this site. Nobody would care. So peace.
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Reviewed By: alissa On: March 12, 2006 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE YOU SUCKED ME IN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 20:40 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is so interesting. Inuyasha was supposed to kill Kagome I would have never excepted that. Sango is wrong they are meant ot be. They would risk everything to be with each other. Inuyasha can't give up just yet!
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Reviewed By: kabilag mm.org mem On: March 10, 2006 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon plz i have been looking in my mailbox everyday to check weather u wrote or not and finally u did it but update again very soon ok thank u bye
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Reviewed By: YAY!! On: March 09, 2006 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so excited you updated!! This is definitely one of my favorite fan fics! I love the story line.. I think it's so original!! Wonderful Job!! I hope you update really soon.. I can't wait!!! :o)
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Reviewed By: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession) On: March 08, 2006 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I don't even have anything to say to this critic...it's already been said by everyone else...Damn... But the funnest part of these critics is that they never use their login name...What are they afraid of, someone as great as you seeing their crappy work? They need lives, I mean why do they even bother to read stories that they supposedly don't even like? Because they're lying sons-a-bitches that say ridiculous things to make themselves feel better about themselves. My mother knows all, and the most true thing that she has ever told me that is most useful is that when people hate themselves they project that hatred onto others. Quite frankly whenever someone insults me for no viable reason i feel honered. It usually means that you intimidate them with your perfection in something that they with that they could do. Love you Portia
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Reviewed By: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession) On: March 08, 2006 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I don't even have anything to say to this critic...it's already been said by everyone else...Damn... But the funnest part of these critics is that they never use their login name...What are they afraid of, someone as great as you seeing their crappy work? They need lives, I mean why do they even bother to read stories that they supposedly don't even like? Because they're lying sons-a-bitches that say ridiculous things to make themselves feel better about themselves. My mother knows all, and the most true thing that she has ever told me that is most useful is that when people hate themselves they project that hatred onto others. Quite frankly whenever someone insults me for no viable reason i feel honered. It usually means that you intimidate them with your perfection in something that they with that they could do. Love you Portia
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Reviewed By: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession) On: March 08, 2006 01:10 CST
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You are my god! I love you. I FEEL SO SPECIAL!!! Lmao. Gahhhh who is Inuyasha with?!?!?! WAHHHHH *pouty face* It's just so wrong to leave it there like that! WHY CAN'T WE ALL JUST LOVE EACHOTHER!?!?!?! lol ok sorry. I'm done! LOVEEEEE YOUUUUUUUU Portia
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Title: omg..
Reviewed By: Sammie. On: March 07, 2006 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, wow..this fic..has really moved me, i was crying for a bit actually, and i cant believe you can write something so great! i cant believe ANYONE could write something so great.. xD... you are a great writer, and i cant wait to read your other fics, please update asap, for you are on my favorites list now..as soon as i can get MM to let me log in lol... this fic is great, and you are great, and i cant wait to see what will happen.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 11:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Dang... totally was freakin pissed this morning that when I read my review I was like... what the fuck is a Sone of a bitch!??? LMFAO... I hate critics... So to make things even clearer... YOU"RE A SON... YES SON!!! OF A BITCH!!! :D Again, with all my love.... Shar
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Title: LMFAO
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 06:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh man... Critics, critics, critics... Do ya'll have nothing better to do than to diss me? I mean really!? You either like the fic, or you don't. It's as simple as that! And just because you're the whopping number TWO of ONE critics, doesn't mean jack to me. You have opinions about my fics then fine, I can really care less... but When you can't even spell ORIGINAL, when it's POSTED ON THE FUCKING PAGE!!!!! Then that's where you have issues. So you know what? Up yours and I hope you have Marvelous day you f-ing Sone of a bitch. :D ----- With Love, Shar Shar aka KAGAGA NO SUBABA
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Title: WOW/Not again!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 04:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, When we talked about this chap I knew it was going to be sad. But, reading it give it a...look I'm still cryin! The next chap is gonna be good!! I'll call ya soon as I can k. Now...I see u critics wanna play again heh. The two of u can kiss her ass like yasha-boy said u don't know her so think before u call her out a name. Now she isn't a bitch! But, I can be one so don't make put my foot put my foot up your ass! We made ya run before we'll do it again. Her fans love work if they could go to a store and get it they would! Why must u hate on her...danm go find something better to do. As for InuGrrrl she loves Shar's work and has begin called one of the greatest authors on this site along wit Kagaga No Subaba! So It looks like u need to do some homework ok. Now be gone don't nobody wanna read what u have to say. Suck Yasha-boy's 12in dick and call it a day
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Title: All Hell No!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Ricky-Boy(your 24/7 man whore&sex slave) On: March 06, 2006 04:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all why do you care so much? I see you taking time out of your day to mess with my darling sharlene. Is it that you wish you had her gift or are ya just a hater? As my freind so greatly put it I believe you really need to get 'laid' it may help ya out, it's not good to be 'mad' that you can't get no dick or pussy really. Also my babyboo ain't no bitch in the way you mean. She a Inu yes...but if I hear that your calling her a bitch again I'll find you my friend. Then we shall see WHO is a BITCH in truth.+_+ Now if you are the person who fucked up her fic and put charters in it that time, she didn't then I'll find ya and kick your ass! okay? good.O_^ Now shary shar, baby I'm here for you baby just like your brother said. This last chap was- girl it's not nice to make a grown man(19) let alone your man cry! Come now, I know you told me it was gonna be sad but...Danm! So whats next? Do Inu and the guys have something in their past too? I mean if the girls all had bad things happen to them to make them HB's. Than the guy must have something too right? Oh well, I can't wait for the cancert! You know I lov u. Talk to you later love...xxxx^_~ Miroku/Ricky-Boy
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Title: WHAT THE FUCK!!!!
Reviewed By: Yasha-boy On: March 06, 2006 03:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See, I'm at the point were I'm about to FUCK y'all up! #One you don't my sister! If you don't like her work just say 'I don't like it' then be on your way. But, when go and call her a bitch I feel the need to find and whip ya ASS MOTHER FUCKER!! #2.To review is to like her story. Nobody is gonna sit there and take time to review a story they don't like when the can find one that do! Half of the people who do don't know her so. How the hell are they kissin her ass! What the fuck do you have critic2 that shows your talent? Not a damn thing mother fuck!! Ya dumb ass can't sell but got the balls to say she can't, talkin bout'raeding' what the the FUCK is that! It's reading BITCH! I tell ya what....SUCK MY DICK choke on it die mother fuck!!! Oh and have a nice day.^_^ Shar, babygirl you know damn well you're the shit & more! We family and I got your back no matter what.^_~ You just keep doing what ya doing all right, don't let these son of a bitchs get to you. Mad cuz they can't get laid it's all good. Mini, Rick, Shanny, and your big Inu-brother is here so that all that matter, on top of that you got FANS damn it! I lov ya! Yasha-boy
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Reviewed By: Yokoshima-chan (not signed in...gasp) On: March 05, 2006 23:46 CST
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*huggles everyone and their sad stories* ...Can I take a guess where you got the inspiration for Kagome's backstory? xD
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