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| "Heart Breakers League" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Title: Fuck off critics!!
Reviewed By: Kaname_Inu_fan On: March 23, 2006 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, first things first. If you don't like the fic then don't review or come back! Simple as that, bitch! Second, I'm alright with people giving advice to improve fics to make them better, but when you both just flame the poor aothor you're crushing her pride! That is just sick! Third, get a friken' life for pete's sake! If you flame people because you're bored, you either need to get a friken' hobby or get out! Seriously, I've read good fics before, and wrote a few myself, and I have never sen someone so DISGUSTING in my entire life! If you even try to report this aother, you're going to have a lot of her fans (including me) shoving up insults and flames up your ass! So back the fuck off already and let the girl do what she's best at! (love your story, Kagaga No Subaba! Please continue and don't let these flamers beat you down! )
| Title: Lalala! Fuck off get a life.
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soooo you're the 'so called' friend of the critic bitch. What they couldn't take their own shit back had to send u? Well as u can see don't nobody give a damn about u or your friend. Ya wanna help your friend out tell them to leave shar alone cuz y'all ain't just fuckin wit her, your fuckin wit all her fan too. Words can hurt and thats why your friend said the things she/he or she-he did! But, guess what Yasha-boy, Shanny, Ricky-boy, her fans, and me all have her back! You know we her friends and fans most of had your 'so called' one in tears or u wouldn't of said shit. U also didn't do your homework or u would know just how much of a ass-shit u looked like say "no one would care" have ya read all the review or are ya just going by what your friend said? Well tell Ms.Man to do their homework too. I mean Yasha-boy's right y'all most like her cuz u wouldn't know she even updated wit out her being in your favs. So take ya nasty asses and fuck off or go to hell which ever makes ya happy and know that WE don't give a damn about ya or what ya gotta say, so keep it to yourself where it's saved from US k!^_^ Now you have a lovey dovey day don't let u & your friend get fucked up K. And god bless ya lots^.~ wit lot of love LW.... LOV YAS SHARY SHAR!!!! but ya know this giirrrll.XD
| Title: Lalala! Fuck off get a life.
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soooo you're the 'so called' friend of the critic bitch. What they couldn't take their own shit back had to send u? Well as u can see don't nobody give a damn about u or your friend. Ya wanna help your friend out tell them to leave shar alone cuz y'all ain't just fuckin wit her, your fuckin wit all her fan too. Words can hurt and thats why your friend said the things she/he or she-he did! But, guess what Yasha-boy, Shanny, Ricky-boy, her fans, and me all have her back! You know we her friend and fans most of had your 'so called' had to be in tears or u wouldn't of said shit. U also didn't do your homework or u would know just how much of a assshit u looked like say "no one would care" have ya read all the review or are ya just going by what your friend said? Well tell Ms.Man do their homework too. I mean Yasha-boy's right y'all most like her cuz u wouldn't know she even updated wit out her being in your favs. So take ya nasty asses and fuck off or go to hell which ever makes ya happy and know that WE don't give a damn about ya or what ya gotta say, so keep it to yourself where it's saved from US k!^_^ Now you have a lovey dovey day don't let u & your friend get fucked up K. And god bless ya lots^.~ wit lot of love LW.... LOV YAS SHARY SHAR!!!! but ya know this giirrrll.XD
| Title: Fuck Off!
Reviewed By: Shanny On: March 18, 2006 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you know what "Friend of critic who 'I' bitched out", Your funckin 'Friend' keeps bitching my best friend out just because she's writing her own fic that alot of people love. If you asses don't like it then don't bother to review, k? So leave my friend alone or you're gonna get your ass kicked.
| Title: Come on now!
Reviewed By: Yasha-boy On: March 16, 2006 04:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it me or do you bitchs have no life. I mean you come back over & over for what? She has 171 review only 3 or so of those review are from your so called friend who I believe is the same critic from before! #1 She wasn't the only one to bitch your friend out. Shit her FANS did too, but I don't see your ass going to them and tellin them off. #2 If this critic can call my sister a bitch and treat her like shit when she doesn't even know her, then she can do the same-fuckin-thing back. Don't put out if ya can't take your own shit back! #3 I know damn well wit all the fans she has their ain't no way ya can sit there and say nobody cares for her work! Did ya see *Portia*(Portia,I love ya girl have both books;-P) reviews she has two books that are in BookStores NOW and one on the way, She told shar that she should become a real author and have her work in bookstores herself aswell. #4 Ya do know that your friend is critic2? WOW 2 critics and 1OO's of FANS who have told the critics to kiss theirs & Shar's ass! Oh wait a few that said SUCK MY DICK BITCHS!!! Yeah she such a bad author whatever should she do. As for tellin on her to MM your late cuz people have already went to MM about your friend so if ya go to MM you'll just look like an asshole, but then again you already do. Now for 3,OOO times IF you LIKE key word LIKE this fic review.^_^ If you DON'T like it DON'T I say again DON'T LIKE the fic then don't REVIEW IT!! Your friend had to have kept coming back to read it in order to have review it, you had to have kept reading it also...THAT MEANS YA LIKE IT MOTHER FUCKER!!! Danm what the fuck bitchs move the hell on are y'all that loney? Get laid do something wit your life, come on! Now have a lovey, nice, and bless day^_^ Yasha-boy...XD p.s I love yas sis
| Title: Listen hun... *Sighs*
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 16:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Look, I'm not one to really get involved in situations like this after a certain point in time... and when you review to an incident that happened close to 20 comments ago… my patience really runs thin. It was YOUR friend that bitched me out first and I am absolutely sure that before then, they never knew me. So for them to say horrible things about me and my fics without even knowing who I am is really immature. I can't lie to my fans… and I openly admit that what my critics say about me bothers me sometimes… and with situations like my last critic, it almost brings me to tears because I just don't get how people can be so cruel. I've said before about 1,000 fucking times… if you like the fic, congrats to you. If you don't, don't even bother to read it let alone REVIEW to it! You're only wasting my time and whatever valuable time you need to screw yourself with. Because after all… even if you did report me, and I did get the boot from MM again… my fans would be all over your ass in a heartbeat. I've had a good run on this site, and if this IS the end, then so be it. I'm tired of having to put up with shit like you anyways. Oh and by the way... you're an idiot for mentioning that you're friends with that last critic I had...
| Title: I feel kind of bad for you
Reviewed By: Friend of Critic you bitched out On: March 15, 2006 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know... I feel really bad about telling you this because I've read your previous reviews from critics. But you've gotta admit that if you have more than one critic there's a problem. Obviously there are a few people out there that don't like your work... big deal but when you have to blow off on my friend like that just because they had their opinion about your stupid fic, that's when I think you really are a sucky ass author. Don't go bitching out my buddy because your fic sucks. It's not their fault, that's your own damn issue! So stop being such a bitch and stop nagging at my friend or I'll report you to MM. Because honestly, if you disappeared again from this site. Nobody would care. So peace.
| Reviewed By: alissa On: March 12, 2006 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE YOU SUCKED ME IN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 20:40 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is so interesting. Inuyasha was supposed to kill Kagome I would have never excepted that. Sango is wrong they are meant ot be. They would risk everything to be with each other. Inuyasha can't give up just yet!
| Reviewed By: kabilag mm.org mem On: March 10, 2006 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon plz i have been looking in my mailbox everyday to check weather u wrote or not and finally u did it but update again very soon ok thank u bye
| Reviewed By: YAY!! On: March 09, 2006 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so excited you updated!! This is definitely one of my favorite fan fics! I love the story line.. I think it's so original!! Wonderful Job!! I hope you update really soon.. I can't wait!!! :o)
| Reviewed By: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession) On: March 08, 2006 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I don't even have anything to say to this critic...it's already been said by everyone else...Damn... But the funnest part of these critics is that they never use their login name...What are they afraid of, someone as great as you seeing their crappy work? They need lives, I mean why do they even bother to read stories that they supposedly don't even like? Because they're lying sons-a-bitches that say ridiculous things to make themselves feel better about themselves. My mother knows all, and the most true thing that she has ever told me that is most useful is that when people hate themselves they project that hatred onto others. Quite frankly whenever someone insults me for no viable reason i feel honered. It usually means that you intimidate them with your perfection in something that they with that they could do. Love you Portia
| Reviewed By: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession) On: March 08, 2006 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I don't even have anything to say to this critic...it's already been said by everyone else...Damn... But the funnest part of these critics is that they never use their login name...What are they afraid of, someone as great as you seeing their crappy work? They need lives, I mean why do they even bother to read stories that they supposedly don't even like? Because they're lying sons-a-bitches that say ridiculous things to make themselves feel better about themselves. My mother knows all, and the most true thing that she has ever told me that is most useful is that when people hate themselves they project that hatred onto others. Quite frankly whenever someone insults me for no viable reason i feel honered. It usually means that you intimidate them with your perfection in something that they with that they could do. Love you Portia
| Reviewed By: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession) On: March 08, 2006 01:10 CST
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You are my god! I love you. I FEEL SO SPECIAL!!! Lmao. Gahhhh who is Inuyasha with?!?!?! WAHHHHH *pouty face* It's just so wrong to leave it there like that! WHY CAN'T WE ALL JUST LOVE EACHOTHER!?!?!?! lol ok sorry. I'm done! LOVEEEEE YOUUUUUUUU Portia
| Title: omg..
Reviewed By: Sammie. On: March 07, 2006 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, wow..this fic..has really moved me, i was crying for a bit actually, and i cant believe you can write something so great! i cant believe ANYONE could write something so great.. xD... you are a great writer, and i cant wait to read your other fics, please update asap, for you are on my favorites list now..as soon as i can get MM to let me log in lol... this fic is great, and you are great, and i cant wait to see what will happen.
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