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 Title: Forbidden Lines
Reviewed By: Kissy_Moonlight [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2009 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am rereading Girl Got Game and I remembered that my friend sent me the link to this fic of yours. I had to come back and reread it! I must say it still has me laughing cause I can just picture her doing exactly what you described her doing!! LOL She is such a spaz but she always makes me laugh at her antics!! Thank you for such an enjoyable fic!
 Reviewed By: Hieis1RFG [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 18, 2007 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it. The end... was sadistic and screams sequel. It does. The voices say so. ^^ Did I mention I love this manga too? They should make an anime to go with it.
 Reviewed By: inu kagome 4life  On: August 16, 2006 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was tooo funny plz wirte sum more
 Reviewed By: Sailor-Kagome  On: June 22, 2006 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked it...You should write a longer one! ^ ^
 Reviewed By: Me  On: June 05, 2006 09:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
READ THIS WHOLE POST. IT'S SO DANG TRUE* 1. At least 2 people in this world love you so much they would die for you. 2. At least 15 people in this world love you in some way. 3. The only reason anyone would ever hate you is because they want to be just like you. 4. A smile from you can bring happiness to anyone, even if they don't like you. 5. Every night, SOMEONE thinks about you before they go to sleep. 6. You mean the world to someone. 7. If not for you, someone may not be living. 8. You are special and unique. 9. Someone that you don't even know exists loves you. 10. When you make the biggest mistake ever, something good comes from it. 11. When you think the world has turned its back on you, take a look: you most likely turned your back on the world. 12. When you think you have no chance of getting what you want, you probably won't get it, but if you believe in yourself, probably, sooner or later, you will get it. 13. Always remember the compliments you received. Forget about the rude remarks. 14. Always tell someone how you feel about them; you will feel much better when they know. 15. If you have a great friend, take the time to let them know that they are great. Add this as a comment to ten of your friends tonight and at midnight your true love will find you. Something good will happen to you at 2:25 tomorrow. Get ready for the biggest shock of your life. Whoever breaks this chain letter will be cursed with 10 relationship problems for the next ten years tag ur it!! this is so scary!!! send this to 15 ppl in the next 143 min. and then press F6 and your crushes name will appear in big letters!! it is so scary because it works.... but if you break the chain.. you will be cursed w/ relationship problemss
 Title: hehe
Reviewed By: Arenja-too-lazy-to-log-in  On: May 28, 2006 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOL, ROFL. Hilariouse story. I love it. Oh, and yeah. Nice job on avoiding the mild hentai (sarcastic). Anyways, great story.
 Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Neo-Serenity [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 23, 2006 00:42 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You are good at keeping the humor...that makes the story G-Got-G..loved the ending you had me laughing...I wish I could have seen her face.. Keep up the great work.. Happy Writing!!
 Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: AznRockerBabi [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2006 22:38 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey Omg a girl got game fanfic WOOT WOOT Aizawa and Eniwa are such a wacky couple hehehee :-D
 Title: kyo
Reviewed By: Kyo Koto  On: December 28, 2005 13:47 CST
Comment/Review:
PLz, update soon as possible.I like the stroy alot! It so funny. Girl Got Game was the first anime book I read,It's also my favorite! I'll try to write some Girl Got Game stories too, but untill next time Plz write some more.
 Title: wow
Reviewed By: Cute puppy [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 28, 2005 00:21 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think your story was the best! I totally love the story.Plz write some more!!I looking forward to read your's story.I love Girl Got Game!!
 Title: Hillarious
Reviewed By: KC  On: December 23, 2005 01:26 CST
Comment/Review:
wow...that was funny...i luved it! I'm reading GirlGotGame as well and i can't wait until i get the 7th book. To tell you the truth this is the first story i've read that wasn't Inuyasha...and it was fantastic! Keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: inu youkai Ashiyame [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 22, 2005 19:57 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is so AAAWWWESOME!!!!!!! u r the only person who writes Girl Got Game fanfics! its such an awesome manga....i think more ppl should make fanfics about it......i kno i will ^___^ GREAT GREAT JOB! i LOOOOVE ur writing style! *favehs*
 Reviewed By: ME  On: December 09, 2005 21:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Too cute! I also love Girl got game, I am currently bumming it off of a close friend who purchases the little gems ^^. I think I understand his need for a line though^^ I mean who could resist her cuteness without setting some boundries^^ I commend his nobility^^
 Reviewed By: Desiree  On: November 29, 2005 09:55 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so happy that somebody finally made a fanfic for Girl Got Game. It is a funny manga and you did it justice with this fic. I hope now more people will do Girl Got Game fanfics. Thank you
 Title: haha it kicked ass
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 23, 2005 02:52 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really did love it! ^^ Haha, it looked like it was GOING to be lemon-like... but then went itno the classic Girl Got Game that we all know and love! You kept the charm of the series, while making it your own story! You freakin' rock, I'm dying to see more of your work! ^^ hmm, ya, i almost forgot. e-mail's buddhaarmada@yahoo.com, e-mail me if/when you write something else ^_^
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