| "Always Somehow, Forever." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: mina On: June 25, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the style of writing was very intresting and well thought out and makes your mind expand more as you read it almost "what if?" |
Reviewed By: Mai On: January 28, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaaaase update soon....^^ |
Reviewed By: rino_serenity On: June 12, 2002 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to know what happens please continue |
Reviewed By: Precila On: March 14, 2002 00:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello?!?! I really like to know what happen ya know?!?!? And please write more! |
Reviewed By: Tokyo Rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2002 23:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Ack! What happens?! What happens?! Rarely a story gets me worked up about the next chapter, so, what happens?! ::Mamo-chan comes flying out of no where and kicks the snott of Tomoyo!!!:: Kekekeke..... It's great so far; the idea is fresh and new. Perhaps you should play on their feelings a tad more? There were a couple of mistakes in the second chapter, nothing to turn someone off the story though. I'm just kinda like 'Ack!' right now! So, yeah! Update soon! |
