| "the collection of lemon fics" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: OMFG!!!
Reviewed By: monkey8154331 On: June 11, 2007 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! U SHOULD SO CONTINUE!!!! PLEASE!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! OR WHAT UR THINK OF NEXT!!! PLEASE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: darknightstars On: April 24, 2007 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please? I'm begging you!I'll give you a riddle and if you get it wrong yo have to write more?
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Title: PLEASE
Reviewed By: darknightstars On: April 10, 2007 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WEEKS???????? I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR MONTHS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: nightdevilstar On: March 18, 2007 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Please Make More Chappies. I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR WEEKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: make another chappie!
Reviewed By: lover_cardcaptor On: February 12, 2007 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pppppllllleeeeeeaaaaaassssseeee make another chapter
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Title: *shivver*
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How the hell did I get into hentai... anyways, great story! UPDATE PLEASE! (come on, it's my birthday today, so please?)
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Title: NICE!!!
Reviewed By: SEX addict On: April 23, 2006 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
SO B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!! HEY DON'T LISTEN TO PEOPLE WHO SAY IT'S DISGUSTING, OKIE? ANYWAY, MAKE MORE!!!AFTER YOU FINISH THIS FIC, MAKE MORE HENTAI FICS! OKAY? BYE
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Title: its so horny
Reviewed By: firey_ice [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there ure so hot its so horny so pls continue( puppy-dog eyes) please. luv u
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Reviewed By: i On: March 29, 2006 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz! plz!plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz plz plz plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz!I'm begging you!!!have mercy!( on leg )update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: sexy story
Reviewed By: SEX LOVER On: March 19, 2006 04:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
REALLY A VERY SEXY CHAPTER ESPECIALLY THE BREAST PART.
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Title: HA?!
Reviewed By: BAKAKABAH On: January 21, 2006 13:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm bothered. i can't believe this...perverts!!! how could you?! i must say this is the most disgusting fanfiction that i have ever read!
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Reviewed By: hello! On: November 27, 2005 18:34 CST
Comment/Review:
where's the update? i can't wait any longer!
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Reviewed By: that was great On: November 27, 2005 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was .............i love it!........ah..........right more, need to go to the bathroom now....bye
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Title: kawai
Reviewed By: abi On: November 07, 2005 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey what do you think your self leaving it out like thi hh boohoo please write the next chapter please sissy
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Title: radhika_best
Reviewed By: radhika_best [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're the first to make a miyu and kanata lemon . am i excited . pls update...
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