| "the collection of lemon fics" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: i On: March 29, 2006 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz! plz!plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz plz plz plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz! plz!I'm begging you!!!have mercy!( on leg )update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: sexy story
Reviewed By: SEX LOVER On: March 19, 2006 04:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
REALLY A VERY SEXY CHAPTER ESPECIALLY THE BREAST PART.
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Title: HA?!
Reviewed By: BAKAKABAH On: January 21, 2006 13:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm bothered. i can't believe this...perverts!!! how could you?! i must say this is the most disgusting fanfiction that i have ever read!
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Reviewed By: hello! On: November 27, 2005 18:34 CST
Comment/Review:
where's the update? i can't wait any longer!
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Reviewed By: that was great On: November 27, 2005 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was .............i love it!........ah..........right more, need to go to the bathroom now....bye
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Title: kawai
Reviewed By: abi On: November 07, 2005 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey what do you think your self leaving it out like thi hh boohoo please write the next chapter please sissy
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Title: radhika_best
Reviewed By: radhika_best [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're the first to make a miyu and kanata lemon . am i excited . pls update...
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: anime_skr41103 On: October 24, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was fantastic! your the first one to ever make a hentai version of daa! daa! daa!.... i just cant ait for the next chapters! do them soon cause a lot of people just cant wait for it...
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Title: KAWAII!!! ^_^
Reviewed By: MzEvilBlossoms [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! That was good! I LOVED IT!!! ^_^ Well done! PLEASE CONTINUE!!! AND UPDATE SOON!!! I love Cardcaptor Sakura, so I'm looking forward! Lol! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! Make it an S+S!!! Because I CAN NOT STAND for them two with other couples!!! I like E+T too also though! ^_^ Keep up the good work! Its BRILLIANT!!! Bye, MzEvilBlossoms xxx ^_^
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Reviewed By: cute angel On: October 15, 2005 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's okay... But I hope you'll write longer...
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Reviewed By: Angel Boy On: October 11, 2005 05:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOOOO SOOOOO SOOOO SOOOOO wonderful! update soon! i can't wait whats next (^_^)!
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: potominaccy On: October 11, 2005 03:28 CDT
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GREAT JOB! It's still not quite clear yet. I've been WAITING for a MiyuXKanata lemon fic! It's been AGES! Anyway, pls pls pls write more!
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Reviewed By: daa! On: October 11, 2005 00:10 CDT
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wow! i agree! that's the first lemon for Miyu and Kanata! but it was nice reading something new.
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Title: WHAT!!!!!
Reviewed By: justinesokawaii08 On: October 10, 2005 06:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the first to make a MiyuxKanata fanfic lemon! I cant imagine that they are in a lemon cuz I have never read something like this about them! Anywayz, I Still Love It!!! It is really great! I cant wait for the next chapter, too because I like Cardcaptor Skura as well! Thanx for the great fic!!
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Reviewed By: Hitsuji [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was alright... a little bit more detail in the intro part... but i love it! i think you're the first to make a miyuXkanata lemon... (^_^)
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