| "Ronald McDonald's End" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 14:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank you for using my idea!! I feel loved!! ^_^ This is hilarious that Tea has to go on a date with Ronald. You had no choice to hug her in order to get the tracking device on her neck?! I would go home and take a shower to get the Tea germs off of me!! Please update!!
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Title: Hiya!
Reviewed By: Chibi Mellie-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Duke right, Dey bolong in Hell.... Muahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Mua, Muahahahaha! >;D
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Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is rich! Ronald getting TP'ed and eggs thrown at him! I'm sorry that Yami's eggs got burnt. It's okay, Yami. My idea for the next chapter is that one of ya'll sets up Tea on a date with Ronald and see how she reacts to it. Have them use Kaiba's spy gear and tools to catch every moment of Ronald's and Tea's date. That would be so hilarious. Hope you use this idea! Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 15:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
ROFLMAO!!!!!! Tristan being paranoid of Ronald McDonald?! That's hilarious!!! Next chapter should be interesting so that Ronald can be killed and Tristan can get over his clown issues. Please update!!!!
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