| "Royal Namekian Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: supersayannnnnn On: November 16, 2006 16:25 EST
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more more more we want b/v we want b/v :-) hehe loving it so far more more more! dbz is the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sarahwardley On: October 26, 2006 15:51 EDT
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please pleae update this is excellent 100% great work!!!! A** lovin the v/b!!!! surfs up!
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Reviewed By: surfer sarah xxx On: September 16, 2006 07:29 EDT
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my gosh please please update soon, this fic gets better and better each time i read it, im thinking about reviving my old fanfics now, you have cleared my writers block of about 2 years! please please do update soon, if you have msn you can add me if you like (sarah_dbz@hotmail.com) good fic! xxx
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: August 14, 2006 15:08 EDT
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I know he's p.o'd, but these two chapters don't fill me with affection for Tien, Chaoutzu, and Yamcha. Awful righteous, considering ALL of them were originally villains trying to kill Goku. Did Tien even talk to Lunch, or did he just accept gossip as fact? I'd be pretty mad if I was her. And threatening to withhold Tomic's kids...pretty low, even in 'good' interests. I hope they get a strip torn off them for the arrogance being displayed here. Isn't it great, you write so well I actually get annoyed at the characters? Hee hee hee. Good stuff, update again soon. I love your work!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 22:54 EDT
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I like how trunks saiyans side burst forward for his mother,but also to show others NOT to mess with hos family. i hope these two can have a love story. :) nice chapter!
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is just awesome! Please write more soon i cant wait! Im totaly in love with this fic!
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Title: Royal Namekian Blues
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 19:46 EDT
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Thank you for the chapter, it really helped. I like the fact that raditz has a mate and he's going to be a daddy. Interesting way you put our Lord ans Savior into your story. can't wait to read more.
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Title: Royal Namekian Blues
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 20:14 EDT
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I was confused at first after the ball scene then when trunks was going to tell the story i was lost there for a minute. i like your story but it just jumps from one thing to the next. i hope the next chapter will clear things up for me. love vegeta and bulma. update soon.
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Reviewed By: surferchicksarah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 05:20 EDT
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iv read some of it and its great il try and read the rest later this is sooooooo good, xxxxxxx i tried to pull off a fic on namek once but it flumped so bad i didnt even bother to put it on the site, well done x
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Reviewed By: Genome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 00:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack, wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love it when things explode into supposedly calm scenes! It's just so unexpected that it pulls you in. Egads. I only have two minor comments. The random lines cutting through scenes really throws me off. I expect to see a new scene or a big time change, but it's a continuation to the last line. xP I'm also a bit lost to when Veggie got his tail back. It seems to pop in out of nowhere, and then disappear again later in the chapter. Maybe it's me and I mised something, but that's buggin' me. Other than those two things, I'm deffinitly loving this new take, but still hating the small amount of reviews you get. Arg. *Bonks Goku* You oaf, stop being so lovably stupid.
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Reviewed By: raccly er 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 14:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first off I don't usually review till the last chap on Mm.org, but on this chap, I have. Even if you stopped this fic at this chap, Its more good enough to be called the best pic I've ever read. Its the most well planed out fic I've ever seen! Theres only once in a while that a fic has something I don't expect, or mostly V/B kind of scenes that I like, but un like any other fic I've read, yours has both. You deeply deserve a fanfic award for this! oh, and if ya wanna get your fic even more out there, maybe get even more reviews, try Fanfiction.net, theres alot of people there, and mostly kind ones. Im there too, im 'Raccly e.r 17'. lol, beileve it or not, it is differnt from this account of mm.org. If ya wanna reach me, my e-mail is: raccly_er@yahoo.com, and you can find my aim and yahoo sceen names in my info.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 02:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Veggie transformation bastard to gentleman in .5 just cause his son kicked his ass! I love it! It's so totally adorable and I love the integration of Royal Request.
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Reviewed By: Cherry Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 02:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I loved your story you have not reveiwed in a long time I was pleased when you did please keep continue your story ^_^
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Title: Not bad
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 23:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I always thought that they would get together on Namek.
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i really like your story! it was very different, and very nice. :) the whole idea of them getting together on namek was so intriguing. and you did such a wonderful job with the lemon. ~_^ that was the most romantic piece i have read in a long time, if ever.
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