| "Royal Namekian Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 08, 2012 00:56 EST
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Mis reading your updates to this, hope you haven't suffered writer's block. Hate seeing a good fanfic go unfinished. |
Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2009 08:46 EST
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very nice story, I really hope you will finish it, and not leave it like so many other writers do with their stories
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Reviewed By: sue On: July 27, 2009 17:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic! I love reading epics and this is by far the best! I enjoy the characters and your overall imagination keep up the good work-Thanks again for a great story.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 13, 2009 04:29 EDT
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Cool update, so how are Goku and Raditz going to react not only when they see the sight before them of the kids eating with the saiyans but also Videl's warning about Android 13?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: November 16, 2008 17:02 EST
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I read somewhere that the chapters in this were getting updated, are any of them done?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 14, 2007 21:52 EDT
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I'm interested to see what kind of "advice" Raditz gave to the other saiyans about interacting with the humans, and the story of how the saiyans rescued the bus from the drink.
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Title: need an intro
Reviewed By: SSJ2VEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 21:06 EDT
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umm,i hope it is not too much to ask but can you like add an intro, or mini story, where you your self, talk to characters? like me and chuquita? you dont see corners that much. but corners help pull me in. so next fan fic can you add a corner please?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 23, 2007 05:43 EDT
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How are Raditz and Bardock going to handle training in the Time Chamber?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 10, 2007 19:23 EDT
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Does that mean that Bardock and Raditz have had their "time" in the Hyperbolic time Chamber, and what's the bet that the missing console stripped from Nappa's space pod is actually inside one of the androids - like the one who's organising the Android Games?!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 06, 2007 19:36 EDT
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Has anyone told Veget and Bulma what happenede to Yamcha yet?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 14, 2007 19:41 EDT
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That was cool. Can't wait to see Kinoha's reaction to her mate and son training in a room together, then again it might give them a chance to mend things between Bardock and Raditz. I wouldn't be surprised if she even asked Stellari as to why Yamcha even attacked their family in the first place. Also, I always wondered what kind of conversation Bulma would have with Trunks while she was cutting his hair in the tv show before he and Vegeta went back to the Time Chamber. But since you're rewriting the saga, I'm interested to see what you come up with.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 23, 2007 19:05 EDT
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It'd be interesting to see Bardock and Goku teleport in to help Raditz in the fight to save his family. If Goku is the only one Yamcha trusts, he's obviously too blind with jealous rage to see that with Stellari and Goku's help, the babies would grow up to be exceptional sayian warriors that fight with the right motive. I don't know how Yamcha could say that he could protect them any better when he was one of the weakest of the Z Warriors and never really took martial arts training that seriously.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 13, 2007 19:21 EDT
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So now that Yamcha's got Stellari, what's he going to do to her and will Tien try to do a similar thing with Launch?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 15, 2007 18:13 EST
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Regardless if Vegeta won or lost the battle with Goku, it's clear that the younger saiyan doesn't want to see Vegeta leave the earth, especially since he had already explained that he had no intentions of ever destroying the earth or take over it or see it destroyed by human hands. So maybe what Vegeta could do is ask the other saiyans where they want to live, and have an elite squad leader that Vegeta can trust to be an overseer of the other saiyans on their new planet, and keep in contact with Vegeta via a two-way communications set up in Capsule Corp.
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Reviewed By: sarahw On: February 15, 2007 15:09 EST
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wow another great chap! cant wait for the update! super super super!!!!! surfs up!
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