| "Hakshua Limithem" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! dude your story kicks so much ass I can't even explain it.. but I'll try ;-) I haven't gotten any in a long time.. years.. and your story made me actually remember what it was like. Damn. Really! BEAUTUFLY written good vocab but not trying to hard. Seriously the BEST lemon(s) I've ever read! I really think the only reason you haven't had many reciews is because in order to review your story you have to sign in and junk.. and that's a pain.. a lot of times I'll write "leanne5582(not signed in)" but urs you can't even review if ure not a member.. Anyway.. that's my only complaint.. Again.. IT KICKS ASS! Keep up the fantastic work!
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Reviewed By: ShadowZero000 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 20:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
It really wierd how no one had reviewed. I thought this was really good. I'm jealous yet again my frined. This was really great. You had good detail. I'm really surprised no one else reviewed. But maybe perhaps you should extend the story. HAve more wriiten and get a plot going. IF you do I'm sure you will ahve a lot of readers and reviewers.
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