| "Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Codan On: December 03, 2006 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this, and it's such a convincing idea! It's nice how all the characters are so IC, please udate!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 09:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess I can understand that He wants Seto to like him even if he isn't in perfect health. I think it would be really cute to see Kaiba helping Jou when he's blind and very romantic.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 03:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Jou, he thinks he will not be himself if his eyes get fixed? How screwed up is that. He needs to think. Did get her eyes fixed make his sister not herself anymore. And Kaiba always the fixer with money and power. This is really great.
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Reviewed By: necko girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say let his eye site fade in and out to it almost to late then let seto save him! that way to build drama!(i just love a little drama in a love story ^^)
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 13:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay Seto will help him now nd they will live happily every after and it will all be very cute with a few nice bouts of angst. LOVE IT!! tee hee. I am very sorry I have reviewed in a while but life hates me and takes up far 2 much time!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 23:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Joey is nothing if not impulsive. I can't beleiev he blurted it out like that, but then again I can. Maybe now that Seto knows, Joey can get some help. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 00:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor Joey! He almost got to kiss Kaiba, of course, since Kaiba threw him on the bed he still might. Poor Yugi, he's either scarred by what he saw of happy for JOey. It's great.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Kaiba eats real food in secret in his room. Maybe he will share with Jou. I like this a lot. Please update soon.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really great. I love it. I hope Jou confesses soon to Kaiba at least about liking him and about his eyes. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 08:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, this little fic had almost slipped my mind. Aww don't wait so long next time because this is a really sweet fic and I'm definatly hooked to it now!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the first two chapters. I hope you update it soon.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 10:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww thats really cute!!! I want to know where this is going next. I'm not normally one for stories from first person but you really make the pov work with the story!
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good idea for a story and very plausible given Serenity's problem. Good Kaiba and Joey interaction. Looking forward to more.
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