| "Hypothermia" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: awsome story
Reviewed By: Sandragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great one shot keep writing pairings
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Title: Not Bad
Reviewed By: YugureIko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 03:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I'm quite impressed. It wasn't the best lemon/romance one shot I've ever read, but it was very nice. I believe, though that Hinata was just the smallest bit too forward with her feelings near the end. The beginning was probably my least favorite part of the whole thing. It seemed a little too short and abbreviate but overall it was very enjoyable and the ending was kind of cute and funny. "'Ramen!'" Awesome!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Tetsu Shatarii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best Fanfics that I've read in a while. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story was cute. I haven't seen a lot of Hin/Naru fanfics, so thank you for this one!
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely love it. Hinata is my favorite character and Naruto Hinata pairing is just what I like. You did a really great job, I hope to read more like this ^^
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: shawnamm1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is sooo sweet. the pairing is just perfect. i hope u write more like that soon!
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Reviewed By: Natsuki-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this pairing! You gave Hinata a different side than shown in most HinataXNaruto fanfics. It was so cute yet full of passion. I hope to see more from you!
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Reviewed By: schpoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! NaruHina is one of my favorite pairings. I'm just dropping by to say that I think you've captured their essence very well. It seemed IC, and, what's more, believable. I just love how they were both so shy about the whole thing. Oh, I hope you write more! =D
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Reviewed By: lk3585 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good pairing. Good plot. Good story over all. Although I think you could of taken it further at least lengthened out the cabin stay so they had a better chance to really come togather(no pun intended). I liked it overall and look forward to your other works. Good Luck with all your future projects.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: KACD2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 23:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Not my normal pairing, but it was very well done. I love the simple love ones. Much better then it always being, 'Let's go slow... rip off the clothes and F&%#' Those can get old... although there just a fin to read. I'd love to see more.
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Reviewed By: heremousiemousie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just one question.... Would Kiba had smelled the sex? >_< Love it! Tilli
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Title: DUDE!
Reviewed By: animeduude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are the best,you found a way to put love and lust togther in a really good story!
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Title: Two thumbs up!
Reviewed By: Kage Kodomo45 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so cute and passionate!!! I love this pairing, and this fic is great. Two thumbs up, and again I
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