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| "Love?is it real.......?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: darkmage009 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 04:23 CDT
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hey.. pardon me.. i am not much of a fanatic of knight hunters but giving your prologue a very quick scan i'd say ur a beginner... very well.. u must edit all the necessary wrong grammars in your story so that no further snide comments would be brought up!! i am, myself is a beginner here in media miner, but i've got some experience... keep practising and one day you'd be great... after the final tests i would be uploading my daa! daa! daa! fanfic (well maybe...) then you could comment on it too... and if i have some more time i'll show you my fanfic of fushigi yuugi ( my 3 FY fanfics are all hentai im sorry! but d others are not..) magic knight rayearth, wedding peach, etc. and a non-anime story lord of the rings... thats all (^_^)
| Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 23:07 CDT
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A look at Ouka and Omi, that's not something you see that often. I'm guessing, though, that English isn't your first language? Don't worry, as you write, your grammar will improve. It's certainly a LOT better than I could do in a second language! Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
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