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Reviewed By: HOPPY-SAN On: October 05, 2006 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON OR I WILL BURN YOUR CAR!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dani Lynette On: July 14, 2006 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
................... i agree with Kokosada on this one. -_-; eventho it WAS pushing it a little far. i really liked it and PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You havent updated since my birthday, ironicly, or close to it. UPDATE PLEASE!!!! ~ Dani L.
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Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 16:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*pant, pant*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*wheeze* Okay, I'm done^^
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Title: Wai!
Reviewed By: Nekosune! On: January 19, 2006 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! Oh, one question, though. What happened to Jou? No one grabbed him or anything... Well, I can't wait for the next chapter and the lemon! ^_^ More yamyams if you update soon!
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Title: MORE
Reviewed By: bunny453 On: December 29, 2005 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Sexy!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hellz_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome i luv that chapter but i don't think they should fuck so soon im mean c'mon thats fast they should find away to wait like some ppl are comin to help and they have to go right away cuz i don't think they shoulf screw just yet it's to fast. Merika
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Reviewed By: Malik and Bakuras kinky slave [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 21:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Isn't Yami just so d*** sweet? I want to see Bakura and Marik get laid next chapter!! Yay F******!!!
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Reviewed By: Malik and Bakuras kinky slave [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 19:30 CDT
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AWESOME-NESS!!! And all that other jazz. I love it!!! UPDATE WHEN YA CAN!! I just love the whole prisoner thing. It's an awesome idea. Seriously.
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Reviewed By: Velvet Diamond [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 02:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I hope you update soon. I want to know want happens next.
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Hellz_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome this story is gonna rock u need longer chapters though those first 2 were short but i can't wai to read more update asap plez !!!!!!!!!!! Merika
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 18:47 CDT
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Hey, this sounds like a really good fic! update!
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