Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 08:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey kiddo, after the review you left me I simply had to check out what you wrote. It's not bad, you do have room for improvement, but it's not bad considering your age. Although how a 13 yr old can write a X rated story is a little beyond me.... I'm not going to get into 'fixing details' here as I haven't really spent that much time looking it over and I really don't do the greatest as a beta. One other thing, if you turn on the option in your profile to recieve reviews from non-mm.org members you might have more luck getting some. Even some mm.org members don't want to be bothered to log in at times just so they can review. Good attempt...keep it up. Writing only gets better as you continue. :) Best wishes and much luck hun!
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