| "Because of You" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Aruka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got me a little confused due to lack of proper punctuations and graph pauses (, ; - and the like). Either way, it was good. With little errors, but I recommend that you make it a point to put comma's in sentences as to not confuse us.
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Reviewed By: teesa On: January 13, 2005 22:47 CST
Comment/Review:
canape is a type of hor d ovre. Canopy is what I belive you ment.
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Title: Because of You
Reviewed By: SnowyBlackOwl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I declare, that's er, great description. That was amazing. Could you - would you write another one?! PLEASE!??!?!?!?!?!!! I really - er, enjoyed your story. It was completely amazing!
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Reviewed By: Maiden of Mystery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO UMI/CLEF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very nice!!! -Maiden of Mystery
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Reviewed By: mer On: July 28, 2003 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love lemons and this was great please make antoher |
Reviewed By: Rei-chan On: June 28, 2003 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, so, so very beautiful. The perfect couple with a perfect ending!!!! It was so sweet and so well put. Great job!
love and peace from Mars
Rei-chan
pyrogirl123@msn.com |
Reviewed By: AJ Angelique [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, Simply loved it |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 01:00 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!
That was a GREAT story!!! Don't worry about it being a little OOC, it was still great!! This was the first Rayearth story I have ever read, so that's a great big plus. I love Umi and Clef!!! I can't say their my FAVORITE favorite, but as of now I don't have a "favorite" Rayearth couple. This was a great fic!! Please write another? PWEEEZE!!?!!????
^_^ Thank you!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
