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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: October 26, 2005 22:48 EDT
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nani...she's pregnant? oi! oh dear...that's...tragic. poor thing. and can only eat ramen...that's even worse. LOL. (quite personally i can't stand the smell of it, ugh). weird stuff. well done, and i love the song, very well thought out structure to add it in. great chapter, keep it going!!
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: rebeliousangel (I dont feel like logging in so that is my penname) On: October 26, 2005 17:54 EDT
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Omg I am gonna kill you! (^_~) Please please please let him have survived! O.O
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: October 25, 2005 22:03 EDT
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O_o. oh...my. i didn't see that one coming. wow. really good plot twist. just...err...being through a number of journalism classes...they would never tack on 'reported to have died' because it isn't confirmed, and in tragic accidents, they need to have some glint of optimism. besides, it's lible (they are held to what they air). unless they have a count of the bodies, they can't make such proclimations. ^_^; but it's a good plan...just the pragmatics was something i felt obligated to comment on, gomen nasi! i'm sorry! it's a good story and i really can't wait to see what happens.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, now after this last chapter, am on my seat here, but am hangin in there. Damned cliffys anyways,lol. Will be waiting on an update.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha0024 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! good story ... please update soon asap.. poor kagome... and inu.. please update soon *begs* but wonderful story so far
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sorry if i already reviewed for this chappy, mm is kinda against me today...so ok ahem* omg tats some sad stuff.... but i knew that waz gonna happen. i'm like phycic er somethin. did you get that idea wit the plane from 'Final Destonation'? wit flight 180? jw. plz update soon. i wanna kno wat happens... *inu_pup*
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Reviewed By: Cutie Blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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This is the first Inu/Kag lemon that I have read in awhile that is actually worth the time! Man, there have been a lot of bad ones as of late that have no emotion at all. Thank you! I enjoyed it!
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Title: inuyashaloverr1956
Reviewed By: am not signed in On: October 24, 2005 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Applauds the author!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: October 24, 2005 21:38 EDT
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very well done. the lemon was sweet...very well written and a wonderful scene between the two. very nice that they weren't interupted this time...but i'm sure they are gonna get lip for the...err...noise? very well done.
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Reviewed By: Milady Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 11:44 EDT
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This is so cute... I love this kind of stories... That are cute and fluffy... Hope you update soon....
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 16:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the story is great. And I hope you get to update soon.
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Reviewed By: darkangelprincess24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 22:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...so cute!!!!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: October 20, 2005 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like where you're heading with this. That is, I think we're thinking in the same direction. Oh well, I like it and hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: October 13, 2005 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad, not bad at all. i like the opening of the story. very good description. only problem being two things; one is that you added the entire chapter in your synopisis section, and the second is that if you upload off word you got to put to lines between each paragraph or else it groups everything into a giant block and makes it a littel more difficult to read. other then for real pragmatics, the story is really good! i can't wait to read more!!!!
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