| "Stay With Me" Reviews/Comments [ 194 ] |
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 22:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww, I was hoping for a bigger reaction from Kagome or Inuyasha...but neither happened. =( At least Inuyasha felt something and Kagome was just bewildered. Takeru is the only one who seems to know anything, or than Sesshoumaru that is. You'd think Kagome would recognize her own husband! As if his name wasn't a big enough clue for her to go running down the steps and wrap her arms around his neck! =P lol. Oh well, let's hope she gains a few brain cells. Looking forward to the next chapter. ;) A couple suggestions on how to improve your story...try using more detail in your writing, describe things more, add some atmosphere, stuff like that. Try to immerse the reader. ^^ Longer chapters couldn't hurt either. ;)
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 14:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am CRYING, for the love of kami! To hell with every bad love-love-novel you can buy in any store - this is by far the most heartgripping, touching story I've ever red! You are a marvellous writer and a generous person, and I do hope you will continue the story as soon as you can, despite lack of time.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 08:15 EST
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omg, update soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 08:14 EST
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GAH! Update soon please please please!
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Reviewed By: pinkmoonusagi513 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 00:29 EST
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NO! I was all excited about the Chapter! and it is ANOTHER cliffhanger! My soul cannot take much more of this! Thankyou so so so so so so so much for posting this chapter!
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Title: WHOOO
Reviewed By: 1yaoilover818 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IA M LIKE DIEING OVER HERE. THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME YOU ARE TRULY TALENTED, BUT YOU ARE PRETTY SLOW ON UPDATING NOT STAYING IT AS A BAD THING. I TRULY LOVE THIS STORY IT MAKES WANT TO CRY -CRIES-PLEASE HURRY UP I AM BEGGING YOU PLAESE HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU ^.^
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Title: lookie
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm it makes me sad ...the story is amazing yet no updates
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Title: *cries*
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is amazing ... i love it it makes me so sad you havent updated it in a while *cries* i'll be looking for updates everyday=[
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Reviewed By: pinkmoonusagi513 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 00:59 EDT
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Ok so I have read the story through AGAIN! Hoping that there would be an update... but alas no.. I hope all is going well for you and that we will see an update to this story quite soon! Because my soul still hurts... really badly... please heal my soul with another chapter...
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Title: AAHHHHHH!!!!!
Reviewed By: Jennifer Keys [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 21:19 EDT
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one word...AHHHHHH!!!!!!! what a cliffy!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 18:28 EDT
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Wow, all that's left is for Takeru to lead Kagome right to Inuyasha. ^^ Then they'll have to work on getting his memory back since he won't recognize them or his brother. I'm sure Kagome is going to bawl her eyes out, hehe. *sighs happily* I await your next chapter.
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Title: ack!!
Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: October 03, 2006 17:07 EDT
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What a place to stop!!! Please write more!
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Reviewed By: glass thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 13:44 EDT
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that was just evil, i love this story by the way. you said that you were motivated to keep writing by reviews so here i am hoping this will help get another chapter sooner so i can see the reunion!!
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Title: WHoa!!!!
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 07:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, long time reader, first time reveiwer...errr i think, anyway, Love, love love the story....Hate the cliffys but in a sick and sort of twisted way i love the cliffies...anyway great updates, and keep up the great work!
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Title: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?????? HURRY UP NEXT CHAPTER HURRY!! I'M ON THE BRNK OF A HEARTATTACK I'M SO NERVOUS AND WONDERING WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT AND BLAGGGGHHHH WHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYY??????????????? I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER VERY SOOOOON!!!! GAGH!! i'll die if i have to wait to long! dfhsdlfkslefkl ksjdlk lakjfkdj lskhkjn
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