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Title: Not bad...
Reviewed By: xsaga [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am happy that you did not kill Kouga, but I wish Inuyasha would hate him more and draw in to his shell. I love angst, cant help it. It's a good story. I love storys where I end up hating the author for being a good writer, mostly the storys end with death. But I like happy endings too, it is good to switch sometimes.
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Reviewed By: Nanishisummer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, you have rested your muse long enough.UPDATE!!! Please?
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Reviewed By: Soma-san [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 13:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOre I must see more please. Thanks for posting and please update again soon. I love all your work and I must see what's going to happen. Best wishes and good waves.
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Title: hate to be a...
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 23:08 CST
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Hate to be a nag but I can't wait until you update this fic again, I know how annoying it can be for some one to say write faster, write faster! especially since every writer works at their own pace. I will say this however, poor Inuyasha why does everything bad always happen to him, sighs, oh well at least he's not completely alone. yes and even though I'm quite angry with the wolf, I just can't hate Kouga. Um any way cheers!
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Reviewed By: Korune On: October 13, 2006 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed the story thus far! I just can't wait to see what happens next... And blood loss is more fun than drunkeness and sleepiness because: Drunkeness = Vomit and hangover. Bleh... Sleepiness = Overdone, plus utterly boring. =P Love the way this is going! **grins** And I'm sooo happy that Sesshy got an appearance! ((can't tell he's my fave, can you? lol)) I like the way you portrayed him. It's how he is... Cold, vengeful, elegant, superior and utterly honorable and omfg hawt! **starry-eyed** ::ahem:: **shakes self from la-la-land** Sorry about that... heheheh... ^_^; Anyways~~ Glad Inu's back and can't wait to see an Inuyasha without any inhabitions... This should be funny! YAY! **bounces around in happy chibi form way** Too much caffine and pocky. ::The usually more calm me is inside, tucked away, seething at my irratic, disgraceful behaviour:: Curse my Gemini complex! ~GRR!!~
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 10:48 CDT
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funny inuyasha giggle lmffao!! ANy update soon i love this story :)
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Title: Surprising indeed...
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: July 16, 2006 14:20 CDT
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Kagome must be feeling awfully stunned after that. I know I was
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Reviewed By: Daisuke Hiwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU!!!! THIS LOVE THIS FIC!!!!! I WANT MORE! Please and thank you! ^-^ And you get a perfect score!!! *holds up sign with the number 10 on it*
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good one girl, I was like what! Thats a good twist.
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Title: Fucking Bravo!
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: July 11, 2006 17:42 CDT
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LOVED the new updates. Just flippin' excellent. "I will," Sesshoumaru said curtly, "after I dispatch you." Sesshomaru is too cool for the fucking room. I look forward to more!!
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Reviewed By: EbonyQueen2015 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 16:56 CDT
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That was crazzy
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 11:11 CDT
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great story! update soon!
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Title: Aozora_Tennyo (nsi)
Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 12:40 CDT
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AWWW!!! Come on! NarakuXInuyasha would be so...well lets just say it would make me melt xD Update soon! I hope you get past your writer's block.
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Reviewed By: jadethegirl On: June 21, 2006 17:20 CDT
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i wish i could help u with ur story... but.. i can't? well if i think of something i'll let u know... but if i could write, i'd be writing, believe me. BUT, i liked ur story so far? :) keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Be-Jeweled On: June 01, 2006 14:00 CDT
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You do know that you're not allowed to have quotes from your story as a summary right?
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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 12:36 CDT
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Here you go but I don't think it's gonna help with the block, lol *hands rin a mallet* ;0 knock yourself out! Seriously tho, I'm sure everyone would rather wait then have you write something uninspired just for the sake of having a new chapter to read so take your time, we're not going anywhere. BTW, tskimiko is me, I was having prblems with the comp and I couldn't see if the review posted so I added another name for myself.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay i really like this fic and I'm SOOO sorry for your block. if i hada malet, i would most definitely help you out there. hope you get through it soon!
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: April 30, 2006 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome. Even the rape was a naughty. Awesome job please write more. I got to know who's at the cave with inuyasha
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Reviewed By: tsukimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 21:16 CDT
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awesome..plz keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: scryoko On: April 10, 2006 15:09 CDT
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Noooo!!! Cliffhanger!! Dern it... I wanna read who's standing there at the cave! /pouts/ ^_^ But anyway, /surprise/!! It was a dream??! I was sooo suprised by that. I honestly thought it was real. I think you've written that part well actually because usually when people want to write something that makes it seem real, when in reality, it's a dream, they don't write that very well and the surprise is taken away. But you... that was wonderful! I was totally fooled by it (and I never was before...)! ^__^ Can't wait for another chapter to come out. ^__^ Great fanfic!!! -- scryoko
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was something else!!! A dream, huh? I really do hope it was cuz it buggs me to think of the two of them like that, not in a disgusting way... just, I guess, cuz I really do love the character of InuYasha and I'm quite fond of Koga too and to have either of them rape the other...yeah I'd rather not have that actually happen but that's just me. The thing of it is tho, the mind plays crazy tricks when we sleep and dreams definately go all over the place. I was very enthralled...I hope you have more ideas for this fic, whatever they may be, I most certainly want to see where the story goes. I must also add the you're a very discriptive writer, and I absolutely enjoyed your creativity. It takes a lot of courage to "publicly" write, I admire that; keep going with it, (maybe work on some of your errors i.e. missing words, incorrect words/misspellings), overall I really liked what you have so far.
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Title: I Came across this by accident...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 12:27 CDT
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And HOLY COW! It was like hitting the jackpot. I loved it :-D The characters' interactions are great and you really made my heart snap when Yasha said he wanted to stay with the others even if they didn't want him. It made me grab my InuYasha 12 inch & hug it. The descriptions are awesome, and even the rape/sex scene was horribly good (hot too). Nicely done & I look forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Really Good
Reviewed By: Sakura82 On: April 03, 2006 20:50 CDT
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This is getting reall good. I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome and the rest of the gang find out about what Kouga did to Inuyasha. *shudders at the thought* Well, update soon for one of your fans, yours truly.
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Reviewed By: scryoko On: March 24, 2006 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh!! I am completely in love with this story right now!! ^__^ Poor, poor Inuyasha... and poor Kouga too. /sniffles/ But I do love the angst... *cough* And your portrayal of the characters as well! Not to mention the plot of the story... Ohhh!! I just can't wait to read more of this fic!! /beams in delight/ ^___^ -- scryoko
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Reviewed By: Go Elsewhere On: March 14, 2006 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Really good! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 19:09 CST
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o.m.g. Kouga raped Inuyasha?!?! That was horrible and awfuly Hot at the same time. Doing a great job so far. Update soon!! Ja ne! Ao
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Title: Better and Better
Reviewed By: zzoaozz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor boys. Great chapter though.
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: January 22, 2006 23:53 CST
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awwwww.... Inu.... *tear*..... I want to hug him and make him all better... Kouga's a jerk! *sigh* great update! lovin' it always! love anubis!
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Title: Oh My!
Reviewed By: zzoaozz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wiping sweat from my brow. That was hot... More! More!
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Title: Better and Better
Reviewed By: zzoaozz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Thanks for not killing the wolflings, they are darlings. I can't wait for more.
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