| "Rivals in Love" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: December 31, 2005 20:54 CST
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i hate u so much right now it's not even funny, i thought that you had updated. u do realize that if u don't update soon i am going to have to hurt something (probably u seeing as U WON'T UPDATE!) oh and by the way it'll be next year in about two hours so you better update the second the ball drops in New York (New York Rox!).
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Title: Keep Writing this story
Reviewed By: Sakura82 On: December 29, 2005 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good stroy. This a kind of story you would like to read over and over again. Too bad it only has two chapters. Well, hang in there and I bet if you keep writing, your story's going to be on of the best out there. Don't quit writing this story ever.
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: December 26, 2005 10:57 CST
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this is REALLY startin ta piss me off. Ya wanna know why? IT'S BECAUSE YOU WON'T UPDATE!
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Title: More Please
Reviewed By: zzoaozz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please do continue this story, I'm really enjoying it.
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o0o0o0o0 :-D I want more! haha! Great job! I love the portrayal of the characters!! *_* keep up the great work rin!
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