| "Rivals in Love" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was something else!!! A dream, huh? I really do hope it was cuz it buggs me to think of the two of them like that, not in a disgusting way... just, I guess, cuz I really do love the character of InuYasha and I'm quite fond of Koga too and to have either of them rape the other...yeah I'd rather not have that actually happen but that's just me. The thing of it is tho, the mind plays crazy tricks when we sleep and dreams definately go all over the place. I was very enthralled...I hope you have more ideas for this fic, whatever they may be, I most certainly want to see where the story goes. I must also add the you're a very discriptive writer, and I absolutely enjoyed your creativity. It takes a lot of courage to "publicly" write, I admire that; keep going with it, (maybe work on some of your errors i.e. missing words, incorrect words/misspellings), overall I really liked what you have so far.
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Title: I Came across this by accident...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 12:27 CDT
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And HOLY COW! It was like hitting the jackpot. I loved it :-D The characters' interactions are great and you really made my heart snap when Yasha said he wanted to stay with the others even if they didn't want him. It made me grab my InuYasha 12 inch & hug it. The descriptions are awesome, and even the rape/sex scene was horribly good (hot too). Nicely done & I look forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Really Good
Reviewed By: Sakura82 On: April 03, 2006 20:50 CDT
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This is getting reall good. I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome and the rest of the gang find out about what Kouga did to Inuyasha. *shudders at the thought* Well, update soon for one of your fans, yours truly.
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Reviewed By: scryoko On: March 24, 2006 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh!! I am completely in love with this story right now!! ^__^ Poor, poor Inuyasha... and poor Kouga too. /sniffles/ But I do love the angst... *cough* And your portrayal of the characters as well! Not to mention the plot of the story... Ohhh!! I just can't wait to read more of this fic!! /beams in delight/ ^___^ -- scryoko
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Reviewed By: Go Elsewhere On: March 14, 2006 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Really good! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 19:09 CST
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o.m.g. Kouga raped Inuyasha?!?! That was horrible and awfuly Hot at the same time. Doing a great job so far. Update soon!! Ja ne! Ao
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Title: Better and Better
Reviewed By: zzoaozz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor boys. Great chapter though.
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: January 22, 2006 23:53 CST
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awwwww.... Inu.... *tear*..... I want to hug him and make him all better... Kouga's a jerk! *sigh* great update! lovin' it always! love anubis!
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Title: Oh My!
Reviewed By: zzoaozz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wiping sweat from my brow. That was hot... More! More!
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Title: Better and Better
Reviewed By: zzoaozz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Thanks for not killing the wolflings, they are darlings. I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: December 31, 2005 20:54 CST
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i hate u so much right now it's not even funny, i thought that you had updated. u do realize that if u don't update soon i am going to have to hurt something (probably u seeing as U WON'T UPDATE!) oh and by the way it'll be next year in about two hours so you better update the second the ball drops in New York (New York Rox!).
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Title: Keep Writing this story
Reviewed By: Sakura82 On: December 29, 2005 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good stroy. This a kind of story you would like to read over and over again. Too bad it only has two chapters. Well, hang in there and I bet if you keep writing, your story's going to be on of the best out there. Don't quit writing this story ever.
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: December 26, 2005 10:57 CST
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this is REALLY startin ta piss me off. Ya wanna know why? IT'S BECAUSE YOU WON'T UPDATE!
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Title: More Please
Reviewed By: zzoaozz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please do continue this story, I'm really enjoying it.
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o0o0o0o0 :-D I want more! haha! Great job! I love the portrayal of the characters!! *_* keep up the great work rin!
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