| "PokeRanma" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: BootsMcGee On: January 24, 2006 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is something I have always wanted to see. Almost all stories set in the pokegirl world only focus on sex and completly disregard the fact that they have a unique and virtually unexplored world to experiment with. Sure it has underlying adult themes but if the auther focuses on the story elements, like you do, you can actually make a very entertaining story. I don't think there has been any pokegirl story that was completed and had any point to it other than some guy trying to get his rocks off. Im hoping that this turns into the norm, because this looks like it may be an exceptional story when it is finished.
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 20:31 CST
Comment/Review:
your right its not a lemon though it would be nice if you were to add a lemon scene for effect now and then but its pretty good as is though i think ranma would want to do some traviling
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Reviewed By: j0 On: January 22, 2006 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I'd prefer if it were lemon, but as it is, it's still a very enjoyable read. Keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: Dr Masaki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 08:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You might want to correct where the Doctor came from the "America's" dont exist anymore the continent was smashed apart by Typhonna and what was left was totally renamed by the survivors seperated into different leagues, Sunshine league, Indego league, capitol etc.
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