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| "Together for Ever" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story, very different from the usual B/V stories
| Reviewed By: Arambas On: November 12, 2005 04:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
woooooooow! so many heroes, you got me confused girl. hehehehe. any how i love the writing style, i love the characters also, you have potential and storng plot.. there are deep feelings in your story, i love the way you show that, you already showed most of human feelings (the love, anger, sadness, shame, hate, ...)i already read so many v\b stories and they all focus on how they get together in old ways, they dont change the idea ever, but ur story is diferent, you cant tell what is going to be next, i love it. plzzzz update soon i LOVE YOUR STORY ALOT!!!
| Reviewed By: M.J On: November 05, 2005 06:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! every time i read i dont expect what would happen next and that keeps me reading more and more!! dont ever stop, update sooooooooon
| Reviewed By: Vegeta's Angel On: October 21, 2005 09:45 CDT
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OMG! its so damn interesting, i love the charecters already, poor vegeta and bulma they stock in the war before their marridge hehehehe, plzz update soon, i really want to know what will be next
| Reviewed By: kuroru-reen On: October 21, 2005 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so interesting! i cant wait to know what gonna be next. plzz update soon
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