"The Story of Yugi Motoh and Davis Motomaiya... More or Less" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: *Whsitles* Reviewed By: burningclaw2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 17:18 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Whoa what a great beginning I can't wait for the second chapter.
| Reviewed By: tirajm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 18:19 CDT Comment/Review: A lovely beginning, but it would be just a bit better if you made them their original ages. Other than that, a great fic. WRITE MORE!!
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