| "Dragon Ball Destiny: Training Hard" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Good, but..
Reviewed By: Dani On: November 16, 2016 08:01 PST
Comment/Review:
I just felt the need to write a review, although I know this was
written years ago. I'm enjoying the story and your writing style
but I'm having trouble getting past the paragraph structure. You
did so well then when you wrote the lemon it turned into one huge
paragraph that's very difficult to read. Without proper spacing to
guide you, you get lost in the paragraph and lose the flow of the
story. You also started putting in 1, 2, 1st instead of one, two,
first and that is very (and I mean VERY) distracting from the
story. Text talk does not belong in writing as good as yours.
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 23:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story but, I don't think I've ever read "Hugged" or "arms length that much in my life. Just like in my story I'm tired of writing door and path. I never knew there were so many doors in resident evil 4 until I tried writing about it.
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Title: Dragon Ball Destiny: Training Hard
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 13:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: inu_lover_4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 16:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful...i loved it....
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Title: Dragon Ball Destiny: Training Hard
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 14:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Dragon Ball Destiny: Training Hard
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 19:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Never mind.
Reviewed By: WTF? On: October 19, 2005 05:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
Never mind i found it! ^_^;
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Title: Where is Chapter two?
Reviewed By: WTF? On: October 19, 2005 05:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
Excuse me, i am enjoying this story, but, where is the chapter 2? its just a 1.
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Title: Dragon Ball Destiny: Training Hard
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 18:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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