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| "Will You Miss Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i advise u make the chapters longer, and well more detailed. It hard to tell what one of the characters is doing, or saying sometimes. other wise rly good ^_~
| Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay, I've noticed I'm the only one really writing reviews, but it rly good. I think you should put in more detail though. Otherwise, I still love it!!!!!!!!!! ^_~
| Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i advise u make the chapters longer, and well more detailed. It hard to tell what one of the characters is doing, or saying sometimes. other wise rly good ^_~
| Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, this is really good, you HAVE to write more. whether you like it or not. or i will go and beat u cuz im mean like that-lol-jk-or am i?-lol. sry im tired. ^_~ :P
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