| "Inu-yasha: The Modern Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: mac_c On: April 10, 2008 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well..I've never written a review so...bear with me, will you? In my opinion, your writting has many amazing and creative ideas, I love the fact you use realism and historical facts within them. Although I have found many mistakes in the grammar or maybe words that are obviously not supposed to be there (and sometimes confuse me since I'm not an english speaker), your work in everything else is enthralling..This particular story seems to have a great start and I really would like to know what will happen next! do not stop writting please! I'm really curious about what Souta's friends plan to do (and Kagome and Inuyasha's reactions to it). I want to know how this particular story turns out, since unlike other authors, you can really feel like you took and honestly feudal-era hanyou and threw him in modern Japan..jeje I think if I had to rate your writting ability it would be a 10 and if I had to say what I liked the best of it, it would be the mix of realism in history/mithology
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!! Please update. Also check out your other story's, they are also being reviewed. I also reviewed some of them myself!! Update everything!! AND THIS!!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 22:06 CST
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Well, I finally came back across your fic and remembered why I had it marked as a fav. This plot really needs to be further developed and be allowed to be told. I would absolutely hate to see you let this one go. So, please don't! I really want to see how this fic unfolds, so don't stop or you're in big trouble!!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wouldn't give up on the story yet. You're still pretty early in the story to worry about getting lots of reviews. I'm sure once you actually get into the meat of the plot the number of reviews will shoot up. The last couple of chapters to me seemed to be filler, and that's harder to write a review for. I like people taking a slow approach as much as the next person, but you spent a little too much time on the stuff with Souta, Grandpa, and the movies for my taste. Already cop movies have been a central point for two chapters in a row, and it looks like they're getting a third. I think maybe you should try to space out the side stories more. Kagome essentaily had the same converstation with Grandpa that she had the previous chapter with Souta. And why would Inuyasha need to know about things like DNA, blood types, and fingerprints? It's not like he or anyone he knows has access to equipment that can analyze that stuff. Unless he breaks into a police station. Is he going to break into a police station? Because that would be cool. And the cop movies are going to screw him up aren't they? Not only are they not that accurate in general, but he's doing more of a P.I. thing than a cop thing. if anything he should be watching detective movies like the Maltese Falcon. Or in a bizarro alterna-world where people in Japan would watch it, the first season of Veronica Mars. Those would be way more helpful than an action flick.
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Title: nice!
Reviewed By: jodox On: December 01, 2005 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just want to say that i liked the story and i look foward to read the next chapter. so get writting
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Title: Inuyasha: The Modern Adventures
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 21:58 CST
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The last bit of this chapter is my favorite part of this so far^^
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Title: Inuyasha: The Modern Adventures
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata* On: October 29, 2005 16:43 CDT
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Problem: If Inuyasha was worried about Kagome getting kidnapped, wouldn't he jump at the chance to get the guy that got Yokio? Besides that, I wouldn't say this is your best piece of writing, but it's still good.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 16:01 CDT
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Your newest story has a really strong plot line already and you're only 2-3 chapters into it!! "You've got such a steady base for this that I can't wait for the next installment, and the next, and the next.... I've always loved your stories and this looks to be no exception. Please continue and know that I've got you marked as a fav auth!! Awesome work yet again!!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how this is shaping up. It kind of reminds me of the first few chapters of Present Time (because of how it's nabbed my interest, not because of any slight simularities). I like how you haven't made Inuyasha a total bullying idiot like most people seem to. I hope that if Kagome gets Inuyasha to tone down the violence and recklessness on her side of the well that he gets her to tone down on the rosary. I can't wait to see where this story goes, and I really hope you update quickly, because I have a feeling the anticipation of waiting for new chapters of this puppy is going to be as bad as waiting for new episodes of Veronica Mars.
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Title: Inuyasha: The Modern Adventures
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 20:25 CDT
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This is going okay but your writing is different from what it's usually like. It could just be me though.
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Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 23:50 CDT
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I love almost all of your stories. The ones I don't like aren't because of your writing style or anything, it's just that the storyline does not appeal to me. I am so glad you are posting a new story. Please update soon! You're stories are always well written and well thought out. I absolutely love your writing. I hope you get a chance to update soon!
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