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Reviewed By: clavira123 On: January 23, 2006 12:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEEEE-EEEY! Why don't you update anymore? I like your story, but if you don't plan on continuing it, please let your readers at least KNOW!
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Reviewed By: thereviewergirl On: December 11, 2005 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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that was simply AMAZING !!! your story definitely has potential... and the lemons? they were HOT !! please please please!! update SOON !!!
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Title: sugestions/ did i spell that right
Reviewed By: eckobaby On: November 05, 2005 22:55 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic ^_^ i love everything about it and i have some suggestions(still dont know if i spelled that right)1.let akane cook GOOD!ranma cant cook forever and its bad if your boyfriend knows you cant cook 2.dont let her be pregnant let them be togather and in love for awhile^-^ young love 3.keep up the GREAT work this is one of the best fics i have ever read (oh and class of 08 rules)^-^ sorry just had to put it
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Reviewed By: Neon Ronin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 23:57 EDT
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Ah, the trials and tribulations of young love... I like the way you're integrating the abandonment issue into Ranma's character, it's not exactly canon but then this is an AU fic, so it works pretty well. Very nice, the way he dealt with his 'rivals' for her hand... and if I were writing this, I don't think Genma would have returned home. If he did he might make an excuse that Ranma was dead, and Nodoka might take it badly enough to make him fulfull the seppuku contract- and we all know how much Genma hates dying. I think Nodoka should turn up and hear the whole story from him and Akane; she'd probably understand better than some people might think. And Ranma could use a mother right about now. As for Soun... well, who can tell. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 13:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do like how you have put this together. Ilook forward to the next chapter when Ranma sees Akane teaching classes, and what he thinks about the dojo.
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Reviewed By: Indygodusk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 21:44 EDT
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I'm really enjoying this. The dialogue and descriptions are great. The lemons were very hot as well, phew. I like how you show RA as vulnerable people and yet strong at the same time. I really want to see Ranma go cat fist, and run to Akane, just to you know. I always love that sort of thing. Thanks!!
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