| "Wounded (now with spacing)" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: DC101 On: December 28, 2012 13:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been seven years since you last uploaded a chapter. But why?! This fic is so good compared to others I've read. You can't just leave us hanging. At least let us know that you've abandoned the story or something. But please continue... |
Reviewed By: AkaiKamiRyu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2010 22:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW........... Just...........WOW!!!! This is one of the best fics I've ever read. I loved every part of it. Even the lemons (which where written a heck of a lot better than some others). I really wish you'd update. Good luck with your writing.
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Reviewed By: Ranma-Allzway On: April 21, 2010 22:44 EDT
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PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
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Reviewed By: shadowalker666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2009 05:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story, even with the change in the way their lives have gone i feel that you have kept the core of who they are true to the way it was intended. None of the changes in them are at odds to how they shold be if it had really gone this way i feel. Please update again and soon, and please finish it though after many more chapters.
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Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
prettypretty please finish this story. This is one of the few ranma stories that I like and it would be a shame not to finish it. So I hope you will update soon. This is too great a story to leave unfinished.
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Reviewed By: LoneWolf1355 On: April 09, 2008 00:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a greeat writer, this has to be the only hentai story that i've ever read for the story. you've done a great job with the characters and plot. I hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Im so mad that you don't have the chapter out yet... lol, but its really good! I hope you continue it! I like how Nabiki is like a multi millionaire, seeing as how shes a hustler, i think you captured her true chracter. GOOD JOB!
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Reviewed By: miamaya854 On: June 27, 2007 15:26 EDT
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Wow, I love this story. I've read soooo many fanfics , I cant even keep track, but this is one of the few that I keep coming back to. PLEEEEEEEEZ update soon!
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 21:19 EDT
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i really hope you update this soon. Your keeping it true in a way to the manga/anime (the fiances and cat-fu nad such) yet also made the story your own. I love it. PLease update soon so i will know what happends.
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Reviewed By: Roja Cyd On: March 10, 2007 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, This was a really fun fanfic to read! It's a bit rare to find a decent Ranma fic where they're slightly older and more mature - a fic that has fighting AND lemons! Most seem to be one or the other. Nice work.
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Reviewed By: wingman0 On: February 26, 2007 18:27 EST
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glad to see you haven't completely abandoned this story. Hope to read more. Wingman
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Reviewed By: Wingman On: February 14, 2007 14:28 EST
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I love to see this storie finished. I hope you start working on it agian.
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Reviewed By: Yesman On: February 06, 2007 08:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story. I enjoyed it a lot and can't wait for more. Very well written and generally I hate Ranma/Akane fics but this one is an exception (probably because they met first in a different way and Ranma wasn't betrayed by Akane after their first meeting like it was in the canon story). Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 13:44 EST
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hmmm, alost 18 months since last update, on a story that seems, to say the least, quite interesting. Well, I want to read more (LEMONS ARE GOOD!) and to see more of Genma's fuck-ups. Not to mention, where is Nodoka in all of this? Anyway, on he lookout for more chapters, if they don't happen, that would suck. Anyway, laters.
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Reviewed By: Sakura2838 On: February 01, 2007 19:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aren't you gonna update at all?? I really like the story and I'd like to read the rest!!! Please tell us!!!
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