Title: Your story Reviewed By: Miggly Wiggly On: October 26, 2005 14:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Your story isn't all that bad, it's just that you have a few grammatical errors and your spelling and punctuation are a bit off. Other wise, your story is pretty good. It's original and it isn't all mushy gushy kissing. We need more stories like yours. Ta ta for now.
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