| "Love is What Keeps Us" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: cool
Reviewed By: rage2velvet (not signed in) On: November 02, 2005 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this so much! It was very unusual and I loved the twists and turns. It also explain's "Tomo's Girl". I am so looking forward to reading the prequel to this story! Awesome! And anything else that you write. I plan on recommending your work when I finally update my own story!
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 01:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
*cackles as he finishes reading chapter ten* Very sorry, but I can't help but have Star Wars flashbacks *cackles some more* Well, down to business. Pretty good, not the most unique concept, but you've used some pretty interesting twists. Almost enough to draw it out of the 'stock' romance category, but not quite. I'll keep reading regardless, though; keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: sadsoul On: October 22, 2005 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait I'm confused?!?! Rin loves Tomo too. Can't help but notice you made our very innocent Rin a hoe....I can't believe she kissed him and then the things she said. Poor shippo! I love your story it is very original. But just don't make her cheat on shippo PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: sadsoul On: October 21, 2005 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yoour story is soooooooo good. Keep up the good work!
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Title: veggieboogersrgreat
Reviewed By: Plastic Spoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i relle like ur story!!! keep writing okkie dokkie smokkie! i'll be looking forward to the nezt chapter. update sooooooon.lol...may the key board be w/ u!
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