| "Hold Me, Kagome!! New Series?!?" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: BloodxXxLust [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 00:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is sortof random. 1yr olds can't talk yet just so you know. But please keep writing :]
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Reviewed By: ShootingStar On: September 03, 2006 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
its pretty good, but aren't they bit young? and what's with Sess talking bout his sex life in details, and Inu jacking off, infront of their parents??? otehr wise pretty gd
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Reviewed By: what the hell On: December 26, 2005 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fanfic DO SOME MORE
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Title: mean!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are so mean for that!!!!!! please o please hurry up and update.
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Title: Woah...
Reviewed By: raqurheartout4me On: October 18, 2005 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um.....woah...Bit young no? jesus...when i first read it the first thing i thoughtwas.."holy shit...: and then "Slut!" It's just a bit unatural at that age for most...no wait VERY unatural!
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Title: why why why
Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great stoyr why did u stop update sooooooooooooooon please
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Title: no!
Reviewed By: Mistress_of_Dragons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its so cool. I just love the thought of them getting caught. Well update soon so i can see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Belle( to LAZY TO LOGIN) On: October 16, 2005 05:40 CDT
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This is getting interesting. I have to keep reminding myself that she is 13 in the show because I feel like they are way too younge to be doing what they are doing. If I ignor the age, I love it! It's a good time line and I like how you didn't make them jump right into anything.
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