| "Amalgamation" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Noone Special On: September 10, 2006 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was completely uncalled for... yet exceptionally brilliant. You moved places people might have never known existed; the emotion compiled in this and the tragic conclusion was... oh, I can't even describe it. Fantastic job on the storyline too, I can't even imagine being transmuted with someone, and I think that's part of the... let's say, poignant charm that comes with this. :)
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Reviewed By: Child Xylia (I have an account. Is it sad that I just figured out how to review?) On: August 12, 2006 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably the fourth time I've read this. The first time was the best, but the experience has hardly lessened with every read thereafter. Absolutely fantastic. *curls up under her bedsheets and cries*
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Reviewed By: Kagome_the_Yorkie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 16:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gee, go and make a tear-jerker why dontcha!
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Title: wow.
Reviewed By: The Elric brothers stole my heart. On: November 18, 2005 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really interesting story line. I adored it, yet it was tragic, at least i did'nt need a tissue, i'm so emotional. This story was sad and made me feel lonely, but i loved every word. Keep up the amazing work.
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 02:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um wow, not really sure what to say to that one, but i did like it. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Creamy_Mimi On: October 17, 2005 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I don't think anyone has ever written about this ever. I''m completely blown away. It's happy and sad at the same time, as well as a little bit creepy. The ending brought tears to my eyes.
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