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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 19:41 CST
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Yay! Kawaii!^_^ UPDATE!! [Good luck on your exams...]
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Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: December 12, 2005 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SL2: Yay two new chappies. Inuyasha: Keh...Whatever. SL2: You still mad Inuyasha. Inuyasha: Keh. SL2: Get over it Inuyasha. You will never have Kagome. You going to have a princess of the Eastern Lands instead. SO GET OVER IT. Inuyasha:*hits Setolover2* Keh. SL2: OWW.... What was that for. It's your falt she left you, not me. Well update soon. Goddamn my head hurts.*gets icepack and falls asleep on sofa*
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Reviewed By: ilvmrcy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this, you're an amazing writer!
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 13:39 CST
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Kawaii!!!! That was such a cute chappie! I really liked the sceen with Rin. That was cute...and funny. Please update as soon as you can! ~DA
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 21:03 CST
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UPDATE! PLEASE!!!
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Title: Continue.......
Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: December 03, 2005 16:36 CST
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Give you 10 al the way.Forgot to ask. Please update. For the love of god please update soon. And please put lemon in story somewhere. I like them being aroused, but I need lemon sceane to release stress and tenstion for them. o~_~o*crys and beggs* PLEASEEEEEEEEESSSSS.
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Title: Yay, wow, & sad
Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: December 03, 2005 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SL2:or Kagome and Inuyasha each other hearts. Wow for Sesshoumaru can actually love a nignen. Yay for Sesshoumaru and Kagome is together. Any of the characters wan't to say anything. Shippo:*runs around* Yayyyy, I get a farther who's stronger and than Inuyasha. Inuyasha:*hits shippo on the head and go chibi and crys* How could you break my heart Kagome and love and become Sesshoumaru mate. Kagome:*yells after Inuyasha hits Shippo* SIT BOY!!!!!! Plus, you broke my heart first you dope and Lord Sesshoumaru is a lot more caring than you will ever be to me you fool. Now go away you two-faced inu-hanyou. Sesshoumaru: Thank you my love for what you said. Now shall we leave for the castle. Inuyasha: Wait, Kagome..... Sesshoumaru & Kagome:*yell* GO AWAY, YOU BASTARD OF A INU-HANYOU!!!!!! *everyone leaves Setolover2 house to go home or do whatever*
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Reviewed By: Inulvr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear FranklinBe, Hi my name is Inulvr! I need as much help as possible on my story! My friends say I do a good job on it, but so far i've gotten no reviews so far! It really stinks!>.< I was wondering if you would read it and tell me the things you don't and do like(also hints and opinions too if ya like)! Anyway,... It's called 'Lost friends that meet again'.I also heard that you don't have many friends....~SNIFFLE~...i don't really have friends on mediaminer either....~yet another sniffle~. Anyway I would so love to be your friend! Also I really appreciate if you read my story and stuff!I really like you r story too! ~pulls out super freakin' big medal and hands it to you~I give it a A++++++++++++++++(and so on and so on and so on.....)Anyway I gotta go! See ya! Your friend,Inulvr
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 21:24 CST
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UPDATE!! WOOHOOO!!! ^_^
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: sasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it but it was kinda like all the others so give it a big twist that'll kick me down. Read my story please
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover4life [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like ur story cant wait until u right more ill be waiting!
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Title: chair-chan
Reviewed By: chair-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. I really like your story! Each story is unique, and yours is no exception. A couple of things have been bothering me, though. There is a rule in English: punctuation, quote, punctuation, quote. Before or after quotation marks (unless it is a new paragraph) there must be punctuation. You don't have any. Also, sometimes you say things like 'you don't have to say nothing,' which don't make sense. Think about it for a sec. There are two or three of these such instances. Instead of nothing, you could say, 'you don't have to say anything,' which would make more sense. I would go over your story and correct all of these mistakes. Anyways, I can't wait for your next update! You are on my favorites list! BTW, I was wondering how old you are. Highschool, probably, since you're in Geometry...Oh yeah, I commiserate. Geometry sucks!!! We just weren't meant to think this way...(If you love Geometry, just ignore what I said). -rosie, aka chair-chan PS: you can e-mail me at rosieaboody@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 22:59 CST
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Why, oh, why... OH how I hate cliffys..
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 22:58 CST
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UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: koa On: November 26, 2005 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!!!! finally!! he admits loves her!!! ok well i love the story so far. love it, love it love it. update soon! aloha
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