| "Sisters" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 14:30 CDT
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Nice new chapter! *cat calls* the double date is going to be cute! I bet you're having fun writing it hehe, I love fun scenes like that! You should try posting this on FF.net if you haven't already, I bet this story would get crazy responses! Oh! and your reviews for my stuff was amazing! You're putting my updates to shame though..haha good job with such quick chapters! JA!
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Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 14:04 CDT
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cute chap with a lil inu/kag fluff i like it. i hope that kikyou doesnt come back when she leaves and kags needs to stop denying all the bad things that deep down she already knows about her sister anyways update soon cant wait to find out what happens on this double date. Ja
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Reviewed By: Elixir of Destiny (NSI) On: October 21, 2005 21:03 CDT
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Okay one word for that chapter: Kawaii! I love this story and the whole dynamic between Inu and Kags. Update soon!
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Title: OMFG!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hanyoukagome962 (not signed in) On: October 21, 2005 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow cute chapter inu is so cute in this fic he isnt as arrogant and i like how kags is so poopular it cool. Then theres Kikyou man i hate having to deal with drunk people can only imagine how embarrased kags was with inu there anyways keep writing this fic is so cool UPDATE SOON (2morrow would be good ^_^ jklol) Ja
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 14:21 CDT
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Cute new chapter! I liked the date it was a really sweet and poor Kagome, I HATE taking care of drunk friends, sister I couldn't even imagine. You make me glad I'm an only child haha. And I do that all the time with stories, doing the details wrong hehe. I laughed so hard at the 'just had sex in a closet look' comment. Anyway, nice update yay!
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 08:56 CDT
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Hey I really enjoyed reading this! It's a fun little fic and I like roomate settings, are they in dorms or apt's? Either way I'm liking the college setting and the way you're writing the characters. They're funny without being too exagerated. Sango and her bat had me giggling out loud heh (I'm a dork like that) But I know how reviews can help when you're just starting out so just wanted to let you know you have a fan! And you've been added to the favorites list. Keep going and a good job with the writing so far!
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Reviewed By: Elixir of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe! Poor Kagome, just when things start to get interesting between her and Inuyasha, Kikyou has to walk in. I do wonder how "close" Kikyou and Inuyasha are, since she seems to just use him like every other guy she's been out with. Nice story, by the way, and I hope you update soon!
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