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| "Someday You Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 02:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. The interaction between Kagome and Sessy could get very interesting ^^ Anyway, hope you put up a new chappie soon! Happy New Year!
| Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 18:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story so far. I love the way you tied in the Death Cab song!! I love Death Cab, they're amazing! Can't wait for the next chapters... update soon ^^
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha_Fanatic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 02:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, nice job on getting the two main characters introduced in the story, I feel sorry for Kagome though, anyway your style of writing was good so you got a 10. You have very few spelling errors so you got a 10. Your creativity is very unique which in other words, awesome, so I gave you a 10. I didn't think your fanfic was boring at all, but you should add more to chapters (even though the fanfic I made had short chapters, lol, I'm trying to make them longer, I havn't written any fanfics here yet) so that we have more to read...Lastly your story rules so you got 10, which means you got a perfect score, congratulations!!! Oh about the Sesshomaru and Kagome meeting, there's many ways to get them to meet, like at the park. Kagome is sitting on a bench in the park trying think (whatever...she could be mad, sad, or just happened to go there) and Sesshomaru goes there to the park, the place were first started hating humans and sees her...(that's a possibility) Inuyasha could be sick and Kagome has to bring him his assignment and instead of seeing Inuyasha finds Sesshomaru...(Inuyasha can either be really sick, or ditched, which ever, It's your story) There's the whole bump into each other thing where they fight and end up liking each other... Kagome could end up breaking something of Sesshomaru's and have to work to pay it off...(Kind of what you thought of, I guess) then there's yours...whichever you choose, but like what they said follow your gut, and update soon, have fun, bye!!! | Title: from: fluffys_mate_kaya
Reviewed By: fluffys_mate_kaya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, you said that the only idea you got was that she should work for, him, but it's been used too much. It's better if you just follow your gut feeling, the story will turn out better. good luck
| Title: from: fluffys_mate_kaya
Reviewed By: fluffys_mate_kaya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 20:33 CDT
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well, you said that the only idea you got was that she should work for, him, but it's been used too much. It's better if you just follow your gut feeling, the story will turn out better. good luck
| Title: Someday You Will Be Loved
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 11:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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